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In Rapt Silence

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      In the silence of the morning
   broken and disturbed 
      with birdsong hardly curbed

      I walk sleepily to my back porch
   coffee already in hand
      to sit and listen to the woodland

      When I’m startled by new sound
   I hear close above my head
      the distinct hiss-shwep being said

      In unison, we both swivel our heads
   I, to find a barn owl sitting
      she to discover me silently emitting

      and there in the branch ten feet higher
   her mate tucks his round head
      eyes staring at me like the ghostly dead

      Barely moving with soft hissing breath
   holding sway with great diligence
      she looks about with quiet vigilance

      Their hiss-shwep sounds are being sent
   menacing to the little field mouse
      owls hoping for breakfast in the house

      Wings spread in silent swooping glide
   quick to lower branch and tree
      behold two more owls are perched to see

      In dark foliage mottled feathers blend
   hunters sitting quiet side by side, 
      the search now looks quite intensified

      Then quiet as quiet as an owl can be
   down one swoops to the grassy ground
      and back to the tree in quick turn around

      a fight erupts with all wanting a little bite
   but he says no-no, this is my hunting treat
      you have to get your own breakfast meat



*This is actually a Rhyming Tercet (terza rima is a form of a tercet)
~3 line form stanzas~

6-26-2020
STRAND COMPLETELY NEW POETRY
(1)any form any theme Poetry Contest
1st Place

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Date: 6/29/2020 2:42:00 PM
Witty, beautifully written and with a lot of wisdom. A big big congratulations! Well deserved.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 4:16:00 PM
Hi Funom...thank you for your kind words. I'm so happy you have enjoyed a bit of nature here today. Enjoy this wonderful day. Jeanne"
Date: 6/29/2020 12:23:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP . Enjoyed the wonderful poem. Love.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 9:21:00 AM
Hi Anisha, thank you so much...it is a thrill! so happy you enjoyed. Jeanne
Date: 6/28/2020 11:48:00 PM
Jeanne, powerful poem and picture of nature! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 9:21:00 AM
Hi Sam...I sure was lucky to be sitting there...and having a woodland backyard certainly helps to get the chance to see such a sight...I'm glad you enjoyed the read. :D
Date: 6/28/2020 10:33:00 PM
I love sitting with nature, listening to her speak... the sights and sounds...magical.. great write, congrats on your win! hugs
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 9:19:00 AM
Wouldn't it be fun for all of us to go on a poetry retreat to the redwoods or something? xoxox
Date: 6/28/2020 4:55:00 PM
wow, what a sight to see. Nature can be so fascinating to watch. i see this got a win. Hurrah! Congratulations.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 9:18:00 AM
thanks Andrea...I was spellbound by the sight and was so happy they didn't mind my sitting there....
Date: 6/28/2020 12:10:00 PM
Jeanne, your really made this story come alive, love the photo as well.Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 9:17:00 AM
Good Morning Eve...I'm glad you enjoyed...I was surprised my photo turned out! :D
Date: 6/27/2020 4:51:00 PM
Sweet sound! Jeanne! watched Carolina Warblers from a perch a few feet away this am meself from a bluff-top overlooking the confluence of the St Croix & Mississippi River in Prescott Wi...jmg
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/27/2020 5:00:00 PM
Sounds divine! :D
Date: 6/27/2020 3:55:00 PM
Beautiful poem. I like ones about mornings and nature. I have one on the entries today.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/27/2020 5:00:00 PM
Thanks Sunlite Wanter...I liked yours too.
Date: 6/27/2020 2:56:00 PM
I've only seen about two in the wild, they are majestic bird's for sure. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/27/2020 5:01:00 PM
Good Morning Tom, hope you're having a great week end. and thanks for the encouragement.

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