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In Quietness Divine

in quietness divine
   the xanthous zephyr balm
      a citrusy ascent
         to sip on Summer’s tea
            a lovely day is spent

               in quietness divine
         a fine fettle of dreams
      the fantasy, a soak
   an Autumn bath of leaves
the stately sigh of oak

in quietness divine
   by brandy quell of warmth
      the crunch of hooves in snow
         a pen and paper touch
            and subtle shade aglow

                    in quietness divine
               calm wings with songs enchant
            all Spring is kin of dawn
      behold a lake with swans
pink petals on rose lawn

1/25/2021
ALL YOURS
SPONSOR: BRIAN STRAND

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2021

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Paige Hind Date: 10/11/2024 6:08:00 PM Wow, you did this form justice...love your play on words and images; they're always unique and special. <3 Login to Reply

Juliet Ligon Date: 1/30/2021 5:44:00 PM An indulgence to my senses. I love your layout as well. I'd never heard of this form before. Maybe I'll give it a try sometime. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/30/2021 6:40:00 PM Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/28/2021 11:22:00 AM - Thank you for all the beautiful pictures you created with this poem, Kim :) - Beautifully written ... beautifully shaped - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/28/2021 12:34:00 PM Thank you so much! :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 1/27/2021 6:43:00 AM Such a lovely poem, Kim, congratulations on your win:) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/27/2021 8:43:00 AM Thank you, Jo!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/26/2021 3:24:00 PM wow, this is sure a beauty, Kim. And I see Brian thought so too. BIG congrats on a well deserved win. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/26/2021 4:43:00 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/26/2021 1:15:00 PM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. I love your line, "pink petals on rose lawn." Enjoy your win/day with blessings.............. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/26/2021 4:42:00 PM Thank you, Paula!

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/26/2021 9:03:00 AM I like the layout of your work. It looks like a bird in flight to me. Reads like a good contender for Brian's contest. Sara Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/26/2021 4:42:00 PM Thank you, Sara!

Regina Mcintosh Date: 1/26/2021 3:24:00 AM Lovely words. God bless you with love and prayers Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/26/2021 4:39:00 AM Thank you, sweet lady!

Judy Ball Date: 1/26/2021 3:17:00 AM Nature in all her glory is a sight to see no matter what the season. Love this Kim. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/26/2021 4:39:00 AM I agree! Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/26/2021 1:15:00 AM Incredibly beautiful poem, Kim. the xanthous zephyr balm that impressed me most. ~~ Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/26/2021 4:39:00 AM Thank you, Victor! :)

Susan Woodrow Date: 1/25/2021 8:08:00 PM very picturesque...enjoyed :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/26/2021 4:39:00 AM Thank you, Susan!

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/25/2021 8:01:00 PM This is enchanting, Kim! I adore the last verse. It's a Fave. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/26/2021 4:40:00 AM Thank you, Evelyn! :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/25/2021 5:49:00 PM I am predicting a top winner in Brian's contest for this sensual, breath-taking write. Pure poesy, Kim. Really special! Ethereal Enchantment, gw Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/25/2021 6:45:00 PM Thank you so much :)