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In Quietness Divine

in quietness divine the xanthous zephyr balm a citrusy ascent to sip on Summer’s tea a lovely day is spent in quietness divine a fine fettle of dreams the fantasy, a soak an Autumn bath of leaves the stately sigh of oak in quietness divine by brandy quell of warmth the crunch of hooves in snow a pen and paper touch and subtle shade aglow in quietness divine calm wings with songs enchant all Spring is kin of dawn behold a lake with swans pink petals on rose lawn 1/25/2021 ALL YOURS SPONSOR: BRIAN STRAND

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Paige Hind
Date: 10/11/2024 6:08:00 PM
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Wow, you did this form justice...love your play on words and images; they're always unique and special. <3
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/30/2021 5:44:00 PM
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An indulgence to my senses. I love your layout as well. I'd never heard of this form before. Maybe I'll give it a try sometime.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2021 6:40:00 PM
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2021 11:22:00 AM
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- Thank you for all the beautiful pictures you created with this poem, Kim :) - Beautifully written ... beautifully shaped - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2021 12:34:00 PM
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Thank you so much! :)
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 1/27/2021 6:43:00 AM
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Such a lovely poem, Kim, congratulations on your win:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2021 8:43:00 AM
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Thank you, Jo!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/26/2021 3:24:00 PM
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wow, this is sure a beauty, Kim. And I see Brian thought so too. BIG congrats on a well deserved win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2021 4:43:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/26/2021 1:15:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. I love your line, "pink petals on rose lawn." Enjoy your win/day with blessings..............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2021 4:42:00 PM
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Thank you, Paula!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/26/2021 9:03:00 AM
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I like the layout of your work. It looks like a bird in flight to me. Reads like a good contender for Brian's contest. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2021 4:42:00 PM
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Thank you, Sara!
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 1/26/2021 3:24:00 AM
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Lovely words. God bless you with love and prayers
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2021 4:39:00 AM
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Thank you, sweet lady!
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Judy Ball
Date: 1/26/2021 3:17:00 AM
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Nature in all her glory is a sight to see no matter what the season. Love this Kim. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2021 4:39:00 AM
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I agree! Thank you!
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 1/26/2021 1:15:00 AM
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Incredibly beautiful poem, Kim. the xanthous zephyr balm that impressed me most. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2021 4:39:00 AM
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Thank you, Victor! :)
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 1/25/2021 8:08:00 PM
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very picturesque...enjoyed :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2021 4:39:00 AM
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Thank you, Susan!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/25/2021 8:01:00 PM
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This is enchanting, Kim! I adore the last verse. It's a Fave. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2021 4:40:00 AM
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Thank you, Evelyn! :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/25/2021 5:49:00 PM
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I am predicting a top winner in Brian's contest for this sensual, breath-taking write. Pure poesy, Kim. Really special! Ethereal Enchantment, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2021 6:45:00 PM
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Thank you so much :)

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