Kim Rodrigues Poet Monchielle Stanza

In Quietness Divine

in quietness divine
   the xanthous zephyr balm
      a citrusy ascent
         to sip on Summer’s tea
            a lovely day is spent

               in quietness divine
         a fine fettle of dreams
      the fantasy, a soak
   an Autumn bath of leaves
the stately sigh of oak

in quietness divine
   by brandy quell of warmth
      the crunch of hooves in snow
         a pen and paper touch
            and subtle shade aglow

                    in quietness divine
               calm wings with songs enchant
            all Spring is kin of dawn
      behold a lake with swans
pink petals on rose lawn

1/25/2021
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SPONSOR: BRIAN STRAND

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Paige Hind October 11, 2024 at 6:08 PM Wow, you did this form justice...love your play on words and images; they're always unique and special. <3

Juliet Ligon January 30, 2021 at 5:44 PM An indulgence to my senses. I love your layout as well. I'd never heard of this form before. Maybe I'll give it a try sometime. Kim Rodrigues January 30, 2021 at 6:40 PM Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2021 at 11:22 AM - Thank you for all the beautiful pictures you created with this poem, Kim :) - Beautifully written ... beautifully shaped - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues January 28, 2021 at 12:34 PM Thank you so much! :)

Joanna Daniel January 27, 2021 at 6:43 AM Such a lovely poem, Kim, congratulations on your win:) Kim Rodrigues January 27, 2021 at 8:43 AM Thank you, Jo!

Andrea Dietrich January 26, 2021 at 3:24 PM wow, this is sure a beauty, Kim. And I see Brian thought so too. BIG congrats on a well deserved win. Kim Rodrigues January 26, 2021 at 4:43 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Paula Goldsmith January 26, 2021 at 1:15 PM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. I love your line, "pink petals on rose lawn." Enjoy your win/day with blessings.............. Kim Rodrigues January 26, 2021 at 4:42 PM Thank you, Paula!

Sara Kendrick January 26, 2021 at 9:03 AM I like the layout of your work. It looks like a bird in flight to me. Reads like a good contender for Brian's contest. Sara Kim Rodrigues January 26, 2021 at 4:42 PM Thank you, Sara!

Regina Mcintosh January 26, 2021 at 3:24 AM Lovely words. God bless you with love and prayers Kim Rodrigues January 26, 2021 at 4:39 AM Thank you, sweet lady!

Judy Ball January 26, 2021 at 3:17 AM Nature in all her glory is a sight to see no matter what the season. Love this Kim. God Bless, JB Kim Rodrigues January 26, 2021 at 4:39 AM I agree! Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar January 26, 2021 at 1:15 AM Incredibly beautiful poem, Kim. the xanthous zephyr balm that impressed me most. ~~ Kim Rodrigues January 26, 2021 at 4:39 AM Thank you, Victor! :)

Susan Woodrow January 25, 2021 at 8:08 PM very picturesque...enjoyed :) Kim Rodrigues January 26, 2021 at 4:39 AM Thank you, Susan!

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 25, 2021 at 8:01 PM This is enchanting, Kim! I adore the last verse. It's a Fave. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn Kim Rodrigues January 26, 2021 at 4:40 AM Thank you, Evelyn! :)

Gershon Wolf January 25, 2021 at 5:49 PM I am predicting a top winner in Brian's contest for this sensual, breath-taking write. Pure poesy, Kim. Really special! Ethereal Enchantment, gw Kim Rodrigues January 25, 2021 at 6:45 PM Thank you so much :)