In Quest

IN QUEST You laid down my rights In your ennobled embrace I relegated them into minds margin Lest they bother us, In our high noon revelry I roam, carefree, for you are alive. Lips down the isthmus, unto rolling hills and dales, in quest for the golden fleece, I may not find in a lifetime.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2012 7:55:00 AM

YEs, the golden fleece we seek is very difficult to find and I admire the message of your Quest poem, Dalila. Thanks for the sweet comment at my poem. Luv, Andrea

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/15/2011 4:55:00 PM

Dalila, Congratulations on your poem being featured. I enjoyed this thought provoking write.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 9/15/2011 9:49:00 AM

Very deep passionate featured poem! Congratulations! Laura :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2011 9:40:00 AM

Congratulations Dalila on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2011 12:11:00 AM

congrats Dalila on your featured poem this week on PS..an awesome one to share with us all with luv.. thankxx for your sweet comments on my poetry .. we finally got home from Florida..now back to reality..oh..

Kash Poet

Date: 5/26/2011 11:53:00 AM

Passionate write here Dalila.Congrats on your HM....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/25/2011 10:50:00 AM

Keep searching for that golden fleece, Dalila. I hope you find it! Congratulations on your success in Drake's contest. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/25/2011 10:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Dalila. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/25/2011 7:58:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of drake, Dalila

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/25/2011 5:35:00 AM

Congrats Dalila on your HM in I roam contest with this brilliant write and excellent adventure in poetry.. so appreciate your lovely comments on my body of work also ..enjoy special honor for quality luv..