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In Praise of the Poet, the Poem Unknown

Let me honor you here though you’re shy to show face on a page, even try to draw thoughts from the cloud of your mind, by a keyboard revealed, quill on sand. Let me ask you, Unknown, to be kind to yourself! Free your mind to disclose what it dreams to the world, what it’s scanned; what you feel in your heart, what it knows. Be surprised by yourself for a change! Put all judgment aside. If it’s strange and a sin to imagine your judg- ment of others correct, give a hoot for the lessons you’ve learned. Don’t begrudge other’s talents, the muscles they form as they mine a fleet moment. This fruit is yours too if you’ll have it! Just warm to the thought, that some treasure gets found in all feelings, your muse might expound. November 27th of 2020

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Date: 3/3/2021 5:49:00 PM
Dear Krakatoa, Your words are so strong, they just might explode; before I can utter my request for their code. Your rhyme makes me and all my yard's birds, swoon over your magical choices of words! (I love your unique critique!)
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Date: 3/16/2021 10:06:00 PM
I am peckish I've failed to match wit long before this Ann, answers permit me a dark William Tell with some humor as well that flys straight to fun's heart in Sanskrit. KC007
Date: 3/2/2021 12:19:00 AM
There is a kindness and gentleness in your write. Lovely, Frances
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Date: 3/16/2021 8:35:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Francis. Continue to bless others with your own gentle words. The world will be better for it! Though I will not visit a poet's site on PS based on their comments here, I will return a comment I get elsewhere if you discover 'there' (using this identity). :-)
Date: 3/1/2021 6:22:00 PM
I find you wise and intriguing, and, this poem has such a pleasant rhythm as well as good advice. Thank you Krakatoa :)
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Date: 3/16/2021 8:29:00 PM
I aim to both share my heart and to grow. Thanks for your gentle encouragement Dalton!
Date: 11/28/2020 5:05:00 AM
Great poem Krakatoa...
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Date: 3/16/2021 8:27:00 PM
May your praise return to you in unanticipated abundance!

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