In Praise of the Poet, the Poem Unknown

Let me honor you here though you’re shy
to show face on a page, even try

to draw thoughts from the cloud of your mind,
by a keyboard revealed, quill on sand.
Let me ask you, Unknown, to be kind

to yourself! Free your mind to disclose
what it dreams to the world, what it’s scanned;
what you feel in your heart, what it knows.

Be surprised by yourself for a change!
Put all judgment aside. If it’s strange

and a sin to imagine your judg-
ment of others correct, give a hoot
for the lessons you’ve learned. Don’t begrudge

other’s talents, the muscles they form
as they mine a fleet moment. This fruit
is yours too if you’ll have it! Just warm

to the thought, that some treasure gets found
in all feelings, your muse might expound.


November 27th of 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Peck Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 5:49 PM
Dear Krakatoa, Your words are so strong, they just might explode; before I can utter my request for their code. Your rhyme makes me and all my yard's birds, swoon over your magical choices of words! (I love your unique critique!)
Kritic007 Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 10:06 PM
I am peckish I've failed to match wit long before this Ann, answers permit me a dark William Tell with some humor as well that flys straight to fun's heart in Sanskrit. KC007
Byrne Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 12:19 AM
There is a kindness and gentleness in your write. Lovely, Frances
Kritic007 Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 8:35 PM
Thanks for your visit, Francis. Continue to bless others with your own gentle words. The world will be better for it! Though I will not visit a poet's site on PS based on their comments here, I will return a comment I get elsewhere if you discover 'there' (using this identity). :-)
Moss Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 6:22 PM
I find you wise and intriguing, and, this poem has such a pleasant rhythm as well as good advice. Thank you Krakatoa :)
Kritic007 Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 8:29 PM
I aim to both share my heart and to grow. Thanks for your gentle encouragement Dalton!
One Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 5:05 AM
Great poem Krakatoa...
Kritic007 Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 8:27 PM
May your praise return to you in unanticipated abundance!
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