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In Praise of the Huntress

(for: Deborah Guzzi)

The forest sings for her hunter 
The twin of the fierce panther –
& I sing a sonorous song
That echoes beyond the sky
Of a thousand miles;
I sing like Dinta the hunter
Craving the hearts of clansmen
& the soul of my native drum
To greet a maiden of a lofty dance
This huntress beyond the Niger’s banks! 

& fondly I bend to cast
I poise pleasantly like laying a wreath
To sing like Dinta the hunter
To cast my songs on these marbles
The marbles on her memory
’Tis a memory of a thousand miles
To greet a maiden of a lofty dance
This huntress beyond the Niger’s banks! 

A perfect cast I crave
The melodious weaver’s band
Of songsters, of dancers, of praise-singers
I crave the ancient hearts of drummers
To dance the dance, my native dance
& drum the drum, my native drum
To greet a maiden of a lofty dance
This huntress beyond the Niger’s banks!

For she who drank of the dregs
Of yonder Niger’s banks
'Tis the rite, my write, our write
The fruit of my forest
The forest of my songs
The songs of my drum
The drum of my clan –
O, the forest sings for her hunter 
A hunter still in poise for a huntress?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/20/2010 8:04:00 PM
Canny , your poem is one of the more clever ones, full of imagery and symbolism. Wonderful for the kind of woman Deb is. Congratulations on the winner's circle. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/20/2010 11:38:00 AM
Congrats Canny on your big win in the poetry pal contest with this fab write on Debbie ..my mentor and TEACH as I call her.. she is AWESOME and so are u for paying tribute to her and now enjoying victory.. with luv..
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Date: 7/20/2010 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations Canny on your win in African Asset's contest "Praise your poetrysoup pal". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/20/2010 10:31:00 AM
Big congratulations to you on your wonderful win in my contest, thanks for the support. You a simply a super Souper! Don’t drop your passionate pen, keep writing! With love, always, Adeleke
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Date: 7/9/2010 8:06:00 PM
You write with such a unique style and grace, Canny. You allow the reader to feel the drums, hear the songs and ponder the fate of the hunter and huntress. Exquisite dedication to Deborah. I hope you enter it in the Soup Pals contest! Love and blessings, my friend. Carolyn
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Date: 7/9/2010 12:39:00 PM
This is so wonderful. I see that you're on the hunter and huntress poetic path today. There is certainly a balancing effect in both. This one reminds me of the far-flying arrow God, Apollo, and his twin sister Goddess Artemis. Great job! Joseph
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