In Praise of Doorsteps

I think of sunsets I have seen
throughout my many years
from doorsteps where in quiet thought
I've laughed and wiped my tears.

The doorstep is a thinking spot
a place to share my day
with loved ones God has given me,
an altar where I pray.

For children it's a special seat
for rest when school work ends,
where snacks and many laughs are shared
with kindred-spirit friends.

For teens it is a meeting place
where games and dates are planned.
The simple structure serves us all,
according to demand.

Great praise is due life's doorsteps, 
both intangible and seen,
and all the portals fore and aft
for all they truly mean.

published in the book Expressions of Faith (Christian Faith Publishing, 2017)


posted 11-7-15

May 2017, placed 5th of ten in Ironic Zinc's Your Personal Favorite Poem Contest

entered in Brian Strand's Mid-June Premier Contest on June 13, 2017

December 27, 2018, entered in Mark Toney's Poetry Marathon, Mile 5

October 13, 2020
Contest Title: Have You Published Poetry Contest    Placed 2nd
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 11/25/2020 9:55:00 AM
Congrats Janice-- I especially like the last stanza!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/25/2020 3:36:00 PM
Thanks so much, LJ. Janice
Date: 11/24/2020 4:22:00 AM
Janice,f you would like to soupmail a link thereto I'll add it to the thank you blog to Line
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/25/2020 5:59:00 AM
Thanks, Brian. I'm sending you a Soup Mail message. Janice
Date: 11/24/2020 3:35:00 AM
Janice, congratulations in Line's, Have You Published contest with this beautiful poem, each line, each word is amazing _Constance
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/24/2020 6:24:00 AM
Constance, THANK YOU so much for your kind words! Janice
Date: 1/6/2019 6:16:00 PM
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. I spent time (lots of time) on doorsteps. Nicely done.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/7/2019 8:31:00 AM
Thanks so much, Valerie! Janice
Date: 5/24/2017 7:08:00 PM
wow Janice. I love this one of yours. FAVE for myself! Congrats on your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/24/2017 8:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. I'm really glad you liked it! Janice
Date: 11/12/2015 10:35:00 AM
Wow...so lovely and deep. Awesome last stanza. No wonder this is your own fav. 7.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/12/2015 12:06:00 PM
Kim, I needed that 7! Thanks so much. Janice
Date: 11/11/2015 9:52:00 PM
I met my husband on my doorstep. They can be pretty special. I enjoyed your poem, Janice! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/11/2015 10:07:00 PM
I always love it when my poem resonates with someone. Thank you, Kim! Janice
Date: 11/10/2015 11:35:00 PM
Loved these Lines "For youths it is a meeting place where games and dates are planned. The simple structure serves us all, according to demand" Congs, and Hugs
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Emmanuel Brian Oule
Date: 11/11/2015 10:48:00 PM
Always and will always Love your Poems dear.... Congs
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/11/2015 8:44:00 AM
Bryan, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Janice
Date: 11/10/2015 12:06:00 PM
Janice, Congrats on your favorite poem win, Love SKAT
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/11/2015 8:43:00 AM
Thanks so much, SKAT. Janice
Date: 11/8/2015 2:30:00 PM
Well...Its a Seven now! :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/8/2015 7:16:00 PM
Thank you, John. Janice
Date: 11/8/2015 2:29:00 PM
This really is very good - High praise indeed for content and originality...Excellent! My best regards, Janice! :) john P.s A Seven!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/8/2015 7:16:00 PM
John, thank you so much for this uplifting comment! Janice
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