In Praise of Doorsteps

I think of sunsets I have seen
throughout my many years
from doorsteps where in quiet thought
I've laughed and wiped my tears.

The doorstep is a thinking spot
a place to share my day
with loved ones God has given me,
an altar where I pray.

For children it's a special seat
for rest when school work ends,
where snacks and many laughs are shared
with kindred-spirit friends.

For teens it is a meeting place
where games and dates are planned.
The simple structure serves us all,
according to demand.

Great praise is due life's doorsteps, 
both intangible and seen,
and all the portals fore and aft
for all they truly mean.

published in the book Expressions of Faith (Christian Faith Publishing, 2017)


posted 11-7-15

May 2017, placed 5th of ten in Ironic Zinc's Your Personal Favorite Poem Contest

entered in Brian Strand's Mid-June Premier Contest on June 13, 2017

December 27, 2018, entered in Mark Toney's Poetry Marathon, Mile 5

October 13, 2020
Contest Title: Have You Published Poetry Contest    Placed 2nd
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
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Carber Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 9:55 AM
Congrats Janice-- I especially like the last stanza!
Canerdy Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 3:36 PM
Thanks so much, LJ. Janice
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November 24, 2020 at 4:22 AM
Janice,f you would like to soupmail a link thereto I'll add it to the thank you blog to Line
Canerdy Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 5:59 AM
Thanks, Brian. I'm sending you a Soup Mail message. Janice
La France Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 3:35 AM
Janice, congratulations in Line's, Have You Published contest with this beautiful poem, each line, each word is amazing _Constance
Canerdy Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 6:24 AM
Constance, THANK YOU so much for your kind words! Janice
Staton Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 6:16 PM
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. I spent time (lots of time) on doorsteps. Nicely done.
Canerdy Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 8:31 AM
Thanks so much, Valerie! Janice
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May 24, 2017 at 7:08 PM
wow Janice. I love this one of yours. FAVE for myself! Congrats on your win.
Canerdy Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 8:32 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. I'm really glad you liked it! Janice
Nunez Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 10:35 AM
Wow...so lovely and deep. Awesome last stanza. No wonder this is your own fav. 7.
Canerdy Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 12:06 PM
Kim, I needed that 7! Thanks so much. Janice
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November 11, 2015 at 9:52 PM
I met my husband on my doorstep. They can be pretty special. I enjoyed your poem, Janice! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Canerdy Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 10:07 PM
I always love it when my poem resonates with someone. Thank you, Kim! Janice
Oule Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 11:35 PM
Loved these Lines "For youths it is a meeting place where games and dates are planned. The simple structure serves us all, according to demand" Congs, and Hugs
Oule Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 10:48 PM
Always and will always Love your Poems dear.... Congs
Canerdy Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 8:44 AM
Bryan, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Janice
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November 10, 2015 at 12:06 PM
Janice, Congrats on your favorite poem win, Love SKAT
Canerdy Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 8:43 AM
Thanks so much, SKAT. Janice
Fleming Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 2:30 PM
Well...Its a Seven now! :)
Canerdy Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 7:16 PM
Thank you, John. Janice
Fleming Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 2:29 PM
This really is very good - High praise indeed for content and originality...Excellent! My best regards, Janice! :) john P.s A Seven!
Canerdy Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 7:16 PM
John, thank you so much for this uplifting comment! Janice
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