In Praise of Dirt

Childhood had its hands deep
in dirt, fingers sunk into the soft loam
of a vegetable patch rooting out
radishes and carrots - or
terra forming a backyard into 
mountains and rivers fed by water
from a garden tap.
Play was bare knees
kneeling in sandy soil 
with a crazed cats eye marble 
cocked on a thumb doing battle 
in the colosseum of a circle.

The earth beneath almond trees
was the cool, shady refuge
from summer heat, a place
to sit propped against a trunk
and feast on the season's crop.
Skin didn't feel right 
unless coated in a layer of dirt
or a pair of jeans respectable  
until wearing the imprimatur 
of sacred soil embossed on the bum.

Come late afternoon or evening,
a hot bath would seem a waste 
if it didn't carry a slurry 
of backyard dirt or leave the tidal
marks from a day's play 
strung out around its white 
porcelain rim. It was the daily
ritual of shedding yet another
layer of childhood skin.

Too soon the tyranny of soap
spread to the spirit in a cleansing
age. Earth then harbored 
only myth and microbes, 
carried the risk of infection.
It is the way of things, sanitising
the sacred from our beginnings,
scrubbing the stains left 
by the bleed of severed roots. 
We lift our hands in prayer
amidst bouquets of artificial 
flowers and the artifice 
of temples dedicated
to a pantheon of sterilised gods.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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November 4, 2025 at 4:17 AM
I invested a lot of time into making mud pies Paul, although I believe it was only once a week I stepped into the bath rather than a daily occurrence (however I've been partaking in daily showers for some years now). Maybe poetry is the mess free version of that playing in the dirt. I loved the immersion of the first two stanzas and like to think that stanza 4 can still be battled against. A real pleasure to read your poetry.
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November 8, 2025 at 12:23 PM
Hi Jin-ju, Back in the 50's baths were the standard...daily cleansing ritual. The turn in the last stanza is a bit of a contrast I know. Thankyou so much for your kind words. Take care, Paul
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