in pieces

I love you in pieces, 
in moments where you're here
and in the ones when you're lost.
In the fog of a need
too deep to understand. 

Your smile comes like a rare flower,
so beautiful, so fleeting,
before it wilts again
crushed under the weight
of something I can't touch,
can't fix. 

I hold you when you're fragile,
when your eyes empty out. 
When the world around you falls apart, and yet you still reach for something
that doesn't love you back.

I wait, 
like a candle burning at both ends,
hoping for the light to stay
but knowing it will not
knowing I can't save you
from the fire you've set inside. 

But I love you anyway,
even when it hurts
when I don't know if you'll 
remember me tomorrow,
or if I'll have the strength to love you again, 
through it all.
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Date: 3/3/2025 4:29:00 PM
Oh, sweet Emma, i hope you’re not iin a case of unrequited love. Your heart speaks love’s ?s here…But let me tell you, i lived with, loving a man(in my 20’s) for 7 yrs. But he COULD NOT COMMIT. (Some men’re like that) ileft him & 3 yrs later, met Jim whi is 7 yrs you ger than I ! See God there! Ask God to silve your heart! Hmmma powerful poem! Been there myself. Thank you! Xox sally
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Date: 2/3/2025 11:01:00 PM
This hits on so many levels. I really enjoyed this because so many can relate. It was therapeutic to read.
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