In Our World


And my world that cuddles another heart next to mine as my stars pulse and fall in line... to discover another, he is beauty pure warming the flavor of air: The moon spreads rays in slow fire of blithe blowing wistfully through life's frames-- that I'm connected with a universe harmless, beautiful, and simple. He breathes in me, holding my hands like a soft bracelet of stars glittering still on our twentieth glide
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Hind Avatar
February 1, 2026 at 10:22 PM
end is perfect!!! Wow, Nette <3
Daniel Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 5:10 AM
Great poem on love and lovers, Nette:)
Rodgers Avatar
January 30, 2026 at 10:38 AM
Dear Nette, Ahhh, two hearts moving in their own private orbit, yet somehow aligned with the wider universe. I love your imagery from the inside out, as if love itself were arranging the stars to make room for this connection. A tender, luminous glide. Winter Blessings, Nette, Daniel
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