In Our Wonderland Chair Premiere Contest Winner

Cruising, we pose, in our wonderland chair, towering above our smiles,
dressed in Autumnal orange and black, my arm around you for awhile.
Insouciant in spiffy suit, you sweetheart me in with juniper-mint cologne.
Black strappy-sandals felicitous dangle, I ride side-saddle on the throne.

The bittersweet-background of our portrait burns like a passionate flame.
Such cushy winks of time, lasso that binds, recalls why we share a name.
Surely God orchestrates a camera-angel, who unostentatiously fades,
Gifting regal hearts in silver and gold, an amorous and sensual serenade.

11/9/2019
Give Me 8 Lines of Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 11/26/2019 4:58:00 PM
A beautiful poem. Well done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2019 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, Joshua! :)
Date: 11/16/2019 9:29:00 PM
Truly enjoyed the message of this Tania. Very nicely done!!! Lonna
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2019 9:37:00 PM
Thanks, Lonna! ...Kim
Date: 11/14/2019 6:50:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your poetic prowess. I admire the way you vividly paint words... God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2019 7:40:00 AM
Thank you, Beata!
Date: 11/13/2019 10:57:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Love
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2019 11:00:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha! <3 Kim
Date: 11/13/2019 6:25:00 AM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2019 7:35:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 11/13/2019 6:02:00 AM
So superbly painted in precious words and rhymes--congrats Kim on your trophy win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2019 7:35:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 11/13/2019 4:50:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your trophy win with your gorgeous romantic poem, beautiful imagery and perfect rhymes!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2019 7:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tania!
Date: 11/11/2019 12:33:00 PM
A real winner in my book Kim. Full of imagery that takes you places. wonderful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2019 2:58:00 PM
Thank you, sweet poet!
Date: 11/10/2019 7:30:00 PM
Where's the blue ribbon? Oh?! Yes, you've already donned it, I see. Rhyme has rarely seen such richness of vision, Kim. Bravo! Warmest wishes, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2019 7:49:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! All of you wonderful poets make me dig deep...work hard at this craft.
Date: 11/10/2019 3:28:00 AM
Beautiful words, and they rhyme too! Excellent Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2019 6:14:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 11/9/2019 10:59:00 AM
Gifting regal hearts, my fav... Excellent write. Ann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2019 6:13:00 AM
Thank you, Ann!
Date: 11/9/2019 10:53:00 AM
Nice imagery... This is a lovely poem Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2019 10:54:00 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 11/9/2019 7:07:00 AM
It's indeed a lovely portrait that you paint with this beautifully expressive poem Kim and I really enjoyed it this morning. Good Luck in the contest, Happy Saturday xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2019 7:09:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mike!
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