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In One Bite

Love take me 
in one breath away 
fruit of dreams 
your are 
the sweet aroma 
in one's mind eclipsed

Angel feathers 
striking records time 
Harp plucks strings 
gently angelic dusting 
out from the cobwebs 
magic flowers colour with light

Blossoming inside 
beautiful warm petals
Touching summer fragrance 
brushing heartbeats race 
into chambers cells 
a carnation amongst flowers

You sit stately 
royal crowned 
Queen 
you are a rose 
amongst the thorns 
in the sunlight you beam

Warmly the butterfies dance freely 
melting golden delicious bites 
buttering the sandwich 
you take the biscuit 
as the morning dew sits upon you 
awakening daydreams 
kissed in your thorns

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Miraj Raha

Date: 9/20/2016 7:26:00 AM

You weave magic with simple words,that in itself is a rare talent Liam.I am drawn to your works every time you post.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/19/2016 6:52:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^