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Love take me in one breath away fruit of dreams your are the sweet aroma in one's mind eclipsed Angel feathers striking records time Harp plucks strings gently angelic dusting out from the cobwebs magic flowers colour with light Blossoming inside beautiful warm petals Touching summer fragrance brushing heartbeats race into chambers cells a carnation amongst flowers You sit stately royal crowned Queen you are a rose amongst the thorns in the sunlight you beam Warmly the butterfies dance freely melting golden delicious bites buttering the sandwich you take the biscuit as the morning dew sits upon you awakening daydreams kissed in your thorns

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Date: 9/20/2016 7:26:00 AM
You weave magic with simple words,that in itself is a rare talent Liam.I am drawn to your works every time you post.
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Date: 9/19/2016 6:52:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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