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In Observing a Yellow Daffodil

It almost appears to me to have a face, and perception. Somehow it seems to be attentively looking out, and quietly considering within. I am glad our paths crossed, and I met you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/11/2014 1:31:00 PM
Daffodil...I thought you were referring to flower. You really got me on this one. Nice personification is used in this poem.
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Sergio Silveira
Date: 1/11/2014 1:55:00 PM
Thank you for your comment, Christine. Personification is particularly important to my poems. Please check out the other ones and visit WWW.Facebook.com/ thevolunteerpoem for my poem on Prince George of Cambridge. Thanks again!
Date: 9/22/2013 8:50:00 AM
words of sweetness and joy. So cute and happy. good job
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Sergio Silveira
Date: 9/22/2013 9:16:00 AM
Thank you, Robin. This poem is part of a few others that I wrote about flowers this past spring. Please check out the others. Thanks, again.
Date: 7/23/2013 6:11:00 PM
To see the picture of the yellow daffodil that inspired this poem, please visit my Facebook Flowers and Poems page at: https://www.facebook.com/pages/The-Secret-of-Ravelston/363837500393876?ref=hl Thanks!
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Date: 7/22/2013 9:22:00 PM
Sergio, a beautiful path to find and enjoy,. glad this path was chosen just for you. love the imagery and observation..... SKAT
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