In Observing a Yellow Daffodil

It almost appears to me to have a face, 
and perception. 
Somehow it seems to be attentively looking out, 
and quietly considering within. 
I am glad our paths crossed, 
and I met you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Phillips Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 1:31 PM
Daffodil...I thought you were referring to flower. You really got me on this one. Nice personification is used in this poem.
Silveira Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 1:55 PM
Thank you for your comment, Christine. Personification is particularly important to my poems. Please check out the other ones and visit WWW.Facebook.com/ thevolunteerpoem for my poem on Prince George of Cambridge. Thanks again!
Davis Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 8:50 AM
words of sweetness and joy. So cute and happy. good job
Silveira Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 9:16 AM
Thank you, Robin. This poem is part of a few others that I wrote about flowers this past spring. Please check out the others. Thanks, again.
Silveira Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 6:11 PM
To see the picture of the yellow daffodil that inspired this poem, please visit my Facebook Flowers and Poems page at: https://www.facebook.com/pages/The-Secret-of-Ravelston/363837500393876?ref=hl Thanks!
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July 22, 2013 at 9:22 PM
Sergio, a beautiful path to find and enjoy,. glad this path was chosen just for you. love the imagery and observation..... SKAT
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