In Next Life

A love , I promise you 
In next life when time will be so gracious,
Your love will be so precious ;this heavenly bliss , I promise you ! 
I promise you my arms around you;
 my scintillating cinnamon skin melting in you ;
my eyes admiring you before the morning spring , yes I promise you ! 
Nothing is left for today ,
a beautiful tomorrow I promise you....
I promise to dive in your blue eyes , my clandestine lover ...
all I promise you ...

Red
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Hull Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 9:54 AM
So much Love and yearning coming through, it must have been a very lucky guy who was in your mind at the time of writing.
Tacito Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 11:01 AM
"Scintillating cinnamon skin", awesome! Fantastic declaration of heart here!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 9:11 PM
It sounds like he will be a lucky man when you keep that promise. A passionate piece.
Maverick Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 1:51 PM
Well looks like sombodys in for it here, Enjoyed the read.."
Andresen Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 12:05 PM
Just a smile ----- miss you - - - Have a peaceful weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Palmer Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 9:21 AM
wonderful write Reds
Thompson Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 9:17 AM
good work Red fiery , well done
Anish Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 6:36 PM
Let us hope there is a next life.You probably know the song from the James Bond Movie - "You only live twice - once for yourself and once for your dreams" This poem of yours is very romantic, Red Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Poet Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Wow!But why not in this life:)
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 3:26 AM
Hi Red....glad you are back here again, happy to read your pleasant poem, thank you. - Have a beautiful new week. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 2:36 AM
Red....it is just wonderful to see you here again, love this, particularly the fifth line...I sure hope so......David
Ao Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 2:07 AM
Nicely written :)with best wishes,Watisungla :)
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August 20, 2012 at 2:04 AM
So moving, simple and nice!
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