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In My Shirts Your Touch

In my shirts your touch
In my tea your moonlit shade
In my boat your rhythmic swing
Since you left this house
All blue-green leaves have wilted
Smoke irritates my lone lungs

I first tried the books
Your intense eyes on each page
On bedsheets your brown hairclip
I look for warm breath 
All in vain it's just a void
Emptiness crushing my ribs

Do you know the truth
In my heart for you there is
In your mind for me there is
A thing we call love
A rivulet of champagne
The flow of which never ends

In half-bloomed starlight
Where the fireflies share their tales
Where fall toop toop dews from night
I ask them of you
Have my diamond gone to morgue
To enrich my depressed dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/7/2017 9:00:00 PM
Spectacular Sedoka Probir! : )
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Date: 8/25/2017 5:56:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Probir. Congrats.
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Date: 8/25/2017 12:45:00 AM
Congrats for long poem. I admire.
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Date: 8/24/2017 10:21:00 PM
Congratulations.
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Date: 8/24/2017 6:09:00 PM
Congrats, Probir!
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Date: 8/24/2017 5:55:00 PM
Absolutely wonderful, Probir - congratulations, my friend! :-)
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Date: 8/24/2017 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations Probir ! :)
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Date: 8/24/2017 5:38:00 PM
Good extension of the Sedoka form.
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Date: 8/21/2017 2:47:00 PM
Wow! A wonderful poem expressed brilliantly, Probir. Such a stunning crescendo ending ... have my diamond gone to morgue to enrich my depressed dream. Pure poetry distilled by your skillful pen, my friend. An instant fave for sure. Love and joy always.
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:41:00 PM
The flow of this poem is eloquent, my friend. it is wonderfully penned
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Date: 8/17/2017 5:53:00 AM
A wonderful tribute--very well written, Probir!
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Date: 8/17/2017 5:50:00 AM
A sad, well written poem Probir, that expresses the missing of a loved one and the significance of seeing or remembering things left behind.
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