In My Shirts Your Touch

In my shirts your touch
In my tea your moonlit shade
In my boat your rhythmic swing
Since you left this house
All blue-green leaves have wilted
Smoke irritates my lone lungs

I first tried the books
Your intense eyes on each page
On bedsheets your brown hairclip
I look for warm breath 
All in vain it's just a void
Emptiness crushing my ribs

Do you know the truth
In my heart for you there is
In your mind for me there is
A thing we call love
A rivulet of champagne
The flow of which never ends

In half-bloomed starlight
Where the fireflies share their tales
Where fall toop toop dews from night
I ask them of you
Have my diamond gone to morgue
To enrich my depressed dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 9:00 PM
Spectacular Sedoka Probir! : )
Krampe Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 5:56 PM
Beautiful imagery, Probir. Congrats.
Dutta Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 12:45 AM
Congrats for long poem. I admire.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 10:21 PM
Congratulations.
Pandit Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 6:09 PM
Congrats, Probir!
Barden Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Absolutely wonderful, Probir - congratulations, my friend! :-)
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Congratulations Probir ! :)
Hopkins-Drewer Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 5:38 PM
Good extension of the Sedoka form.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 2:47 PM
Wow! A wonderful poem expressed brilliantly, Probir. Such a stunning crescendo ending ... have my diamond gone to morgue to enrich my depressed dream. Pure poetry distilled by your skillful pen, my friend. An instant fave for sure. Love and joy always.
Muideen Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 4:41 PM
The flow of this poem is eloquent, my friend. it is wonderfully penned
Pandit Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 5:53 AM
A wonderful tribute--very well written, Probir!
Sands Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 5:50 AM
A sad, well written poem Probir, that expresses the missing of a loved one and the significance of seeing or remembering things left behind.
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