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In My Shirts Your Touch

In my shirts your touch In my tea your moonlit shade In my boat your rhythmic swing Since you left this house All blue-green leaves have wilted Smoke irritates my lone lungs I first tried the books Your intense eyes on each page On bedsheets your brown hairclip I look for warm breath All in vain it's just a void Emptiness crushing my ribs Do you know the truth In my heart for you there is In your mind for me there is A thing we call love A rivulet of champagne The flow of which never ends In half-bloomed starlight Where the fireflies share their tales Where fall toop toop dews from night I ask them of you Have my diamond gone to morgue To enrich my depressed dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/7/2017 9:00:00 PM
Spectacular Sedoka Probir! : )
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Date: 8/25/2017 5:56:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Probir. Congrats.
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Date: 8/25/2017 12:45:00 AM
Congrats for long poem. I admire.
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Date: 8/24/2017 10:21:00 PM
Congratulations.
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Date: 8/24/2017 6:09:00 PM
Congrats, Probir!
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Date: 8/24/2017 5:55:00 PM
Absolutely wonderful, Probir - congratulations, my friend! :-)
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Date: 8/24/2017 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations Probir ! :)
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Date: 8/24/2017 5:38:00 PM
Good extension of the Sedoka form.
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Date: 8/21/2017 2:47:00 PM
Wow! A wonderful poem expressed brilliantly, Probir. Such a stunning crescendo ending ... have my diamond gone to morgue to enrich my depressed dream. Pure poetry distilled by your skillful pen, my friend. An instant fave for sure. Love and joy always.
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:41:00 PM
The flow of this poem is eloquent, my friend. it is wonderfully penned
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Date: 8/17/2017 5:53:00 AM
A wonderful tribute--very well written, Probir!
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Date: 8/17/2017 5:50:00 AM
A sad, well written poem Probir, that expresses the missing of a loved one and the significance of seeing or remembering things left behind.
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