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ochre painted sky behind grassland silhouettes framed by smoke filled clouds January 30th, 2016

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Luaer Solnox

Date: 2/1/2016 5:08:00 PM

“Framed by smoke filled clouds” makes me think about the coils of memory. How interesting it is to think how memory frames our nature. Thank you for this moment of wonder.

Lin Lane
Date: 2/1/2016 5:13:00 PM

Thank you so much, Luaer. Our memories stay with us as if trapped by those coils. I appreciate your kind comments.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/31/2016 1:34:00 PM

Your wonderful haiku matches the dramatic and beautiful picture Lin. It leaves a lasting impression in the mind.. #7

Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2016 3:35:00 PM

Wonderful praise coming from you, Connie. Thanks for being so generous.

White Sage

Date: 1/30/2016 3:38:00 PM

nature's everywhere around, just close your eyes and grasp the thin air lol...excellent write Lin, and a nice picture too ( am getting confused, that first guy in the pic, is he smoking something? or eating grass? lol, just joking)

Lin Lane
Date: 1/30/2016 3:42:00 PM

lol you're such a silly sage. It's the picture we had to use for a contest, so it's open to individual interpretation. Thanks.

David Mohn

Date: 1/30/2016 1:54:00 PM

beautifully descriptive Lin :)

Lin Lane
Date: 1/30/2016 1:58:00 PM

Thank you very much, David.