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ochre painted sky

   behind grassland silhouettes

  framed by smoke filled clouds





January 30th, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/1/2016 5:08:00 PM
“Framed by smoke filled clouds” makes me think about the coils of memory. How interesting it is to think how memory frames our nature. Thank you for this moment of wonder.
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Date: 2/1/2016 5:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Luaer. Our memories stay with us as if trapped by those coils. I appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 1/31/2016 1:34:00 PM
Your wonderful haiku matches the dramatic and beautiful picture Lin. It leaves a lasting impression in the mind.. #7
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Date: 1/31/2016 3:35:00 PM
Wonderful praise coming from you, Connie. Thanks for being so generous.
Date: 1/30/2016 3:38:00 PM
nature's everywhere around, just close your eyes and grasp the thin air lol...excellent write Lin, and a nice picture too ( am getting confused, that first guy in the pic, is he smoking something? or eating grass? lol, just joking)
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Date: 1/30/2016 3:42:00 PM
lol you're such a silly sage. It's the picture we had to use for a contest, so it's open to individual interpretation. Thanks.
Date: 1/30/2016 1:54:00 PM
beautifully descriptive Lin :)
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Date: 1/30/2016 1:58:00 PM
Thank you very much, David.
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