In My Search For Nature

ochre painted sky

   behind grassland silhouettes

  framed by smoke filled clouds





January 30th, 2016

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Luaer Solnox

February 1, 2016 at 5:08 PM

“Framed by smoke filled clouds” makes me think about the coils of memory. How interesting it is to think how memory frames our nature. Thank you for this moment of wonder.

Lin Lane

February 1, 2016 at 5:13 PM

Thank you so much, Luaer. Our memories stay with us as if trapped by those coils. I appreciate your kind comments.

Connie Marcum Wong

January 31, 2016 at 1:34 PM

Your wonderful haiku matches the dramatic and beautiful picture Lin. It leaves a lasting impression in the mind.. #7

Lin Lane

January 31, 2016 at 3:35 PM

Wonderful praise coming from you, Connie. Thanks for being so generous.

White Sage

January 30, 2016 at 3:38 PM

nature's everywhere around, just close your eyes and grasp the thin air lol...excellent write Lin, and a nice picture too ( am getting confused, that first guy in the pic, is he smoking something? or eating grass? lol, just joking)

Lin Lane

January 30, 2016 at 3:42 PM

lol you're such a silly sage. It's the picture we had to use for a contest, so it's open to individual interpretation. Thanks.