Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

In My Reflections

by Michael  Falotico

                                           I write with mirrors that don't reflect..
                                       That cascade visions that you can't dissect..
                                 You can climb into my mind and twist in the breeze..
                                       Play in my dreams and write as you please..
                             Or lay dormant on the shores of my soul like naked glass..
                                      And feel safe and free till your ship has passed..

"Put yourself in the readers shoes"
contest sponsored by Judy Konos

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Gwendolen Song August 10, 2011 at 12:26 PM Hi Michael. This begins with a great title! I like the 2 objects you described that unnaturally don't reflect...this shows your resistance to be transparent in your work. Very revealing write! Hey, let's do a collab of our infamous paperclip collection! lol. Good luck with Judy's contest! Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich August 9, 2011 at 11:30 PM Michael, I just read the three winners of this particular contest and honestly (though the winners were fine) I think this one here is also just wonderful. I wonder why not ten winners to capture these other entries such as yours!! Michael J. Falotico August 10, 2011 at 4:18 PM Thanks Hun, I gave it my best... But your words to make me feel like I won... luv Michael

Tim B August 7, 2011 at 6:28 PM Michael, you really got me with that first line, writing with mirrors don't reflect.. this is awesome, almost like your words are little vampires that suck the emotion from the reader, in a good way of course!! Excellent poetry and a fine entry for the contest, good luck.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 7, 2011 at 2:21 PM such a disgrace this site is turning into not being able to upgrade without disrupting everything else.. I have no access to my member page still after sending many yahoo mails to PS. TPS.. oh.. well thankxx for letting me rant.. we are all a little paranoid luv with this unacceptable interruption of our creativity.. my fuse is shorter than short..it is non existent at this point.. but still smiling at your lovely words ..luv.. J.G. forever with luv..

Dinda Minardi August 7, 2011 at 1:32 PM Those are really what I felt when I read your writings! As you always enriched reader's feelings with your thoughts and words. :) Goodluck in the contest, Michael.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 7, 2011 at 11:35 AM wow .. a beautiful wonder Michael.. such finesse in these lines composed luv.. good luck in the contest..luv that soul like naked glass line.. impressive as all the rest .. always get a spark from these sensational words... your J.G. in sweetie mode.. enjoying the crowded beach today luv..

Nette Onclaud August 7, 2011 at 5:21 AM a very compassionate , serene, and well-scribed offering michael... best wishes in the contest