Daniel Cheeseman Poet Couplet

In My Next Life

I will ride the thermals on golden wing
Through feathers the breeze shall sing

And all below shall win my eye
From tranquil clouds and cerulean sky

Dip and dive in a sun so bright
This golden coat of pure delight

Wings shall span and shadows cast
Primary coverts against the sun contrast

And to the aerie I shall glide
Where love is found at my lovers side

This craggy peak shall ethereal flow
Two hearts sated in sunsets glow

Primary coverts: outer wing feathers.

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Debbie Guzzi November 24, 2012 at 6:05 PM Flight is a wonderful gift aye? Light & Love

Shaz Cheesman October 7, 2012 at 9:40 PM Thats a beautifu next life - Shaz

Anne-Lise Andresen January 30, 2012 at 2:07 PM I reading some poems you written,I end up here.This one I like alot,flows lovely in rhyme...beautiful Daniel!! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

C.C Bloomsfield February 9, 2011 at 11:04 AM Simply beautiful

Phyllis Babcock January 29, 2011 at 7:46 AM A wonderful poem with nice rhyme. God Bless Phyl

Robert Pettit January 26, 2011 at 7:59 PM A very descriptive set of couplets that have great rhyming.

Allie Lusha January 26, 2011 at 8:14 AM Your poetry soars and flows perfectly, and as always leaves a warm glow inside.. lovely Daniel... Allie

Honesty Oimbo January 16, 2011 at 6:53 AM i like the rhyme

Sara Kendrick January 15, 2011 at 10:40 AM Great one ...Excellent descriptive and expressive work..Grabbed my attention and held on..Sara

The Situation January 14, 2011 at 11:40 AM this is the way i like to see poetry . with a great flow. and words not too hard to understand. and the beauty of breifness yet saying much. i have a feeling that you'll get your wings. T. S.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 10, 2011 at 6:07 PM Sounds exciting and enthusiastic Daniel .. and free of fleshy body will allow all the things easily .. enjoyed as always with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire January 10, 2011 at 4:48 PM As one who often dreams of flying, you took me on a delightfully romantic flight in this poem, Daniel. Beautiful images of the birds and sky. Love, Carolyn

January 10, 2011 at 1:41 PM "Wings shall span and shadows cast Primary coverts against the sun contrast" I feel like that line is forced. Other than that I enjoyed it. Keep it up!