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In My Mind

Down falls fast the frozen rain chills the air with my disdain on my heart it leaves a stain yet in my mind you remain. I drift and fade think of you try to bring you into view draw a color paint a hue fixing on what lovers do. It’s falling fast all around again the din and its sound try to keep the peace I found as it thunders to the ground. In my mind we’re at this shore life with you and wanting more seagulls screeching fly and soar mixing with the ocean’s score. Never no never have we been lovers as such and in between within my mind yet barely seen under the rain near the ravine. (click on the pic to buy my poetry book!)

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Date: 12/29/2020 3:22:00 AM
Lovely and brilliant writing. Love sent your way. God B L E S S you with a Happy New Year
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/29/2020 6:28:00 AM
Thank you as always Regina.
Date: 12/28/2020 4:48:00 PM
This is love. Thanks for sharong Rob.
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/29/2020 6:27:00 AM
Sweet, painful love. Thanks Lei!
Date: 12/28/2020 4:43:00 PM
Rob, your poem has such depth and longing in it, very moving, your blog touched my heart and your book is wonderful, I will be visiting Amazon in January _Constance
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/29/2020 6:27:00 AM
Oh thank you so very much Constance, that is very kind. And thanks for stopping by my blog.
Date: 12/28/2020 12:51:00 PM
This is very lovely poetry. I saw your book link, Congratulations!!
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/29/2020 6:27:00 AM
Thank you kindly Andrea!
Date: 12/28/2020 11:10:00 AM
Hello Rob Levasseur, this is so romantic. Through the who;e poem is romance. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/28/2020 11:32:00 AM
Hello Rob Levasseur, my married name is French. Only .My background is Polish and Czech. I do not speak either languages only English. I am a widow. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/28/2020 11:20:00 AM
Thank you very much Darlene. I told you I would stay if you are french, remember? Well, you never answered me, but I know with a last name like De Beaulieu, you must be! Thank you for stopping by to read.
Date: 12/28/2020 9:22:00 AM
“mixing with the ocean’s score” , there’s a line I wish I wrote! Excellent, evocative piece. xomo
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/28/2020 10:30:00 AM
Your comment is appreciated! Thank you for stopping by

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