In My Heart and Soul

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Author's Note: "In My Heart and Soul" is a very compelling rhymed verse that I originally wrote on May 20, 2018. The word picture I have tried to create with this verse should leave the reader with a very positive and uplifting message. Enjoy the poem!! (Gary Bateman - May 16, 2020) (Verse)

In My Heart and Soul

In my heart and soul thou shall always be,
Full of life, passion, and a real love for me.
By equal measure I give thee my love forever,
Knowing that God’s love shall desert us never.
Our freeborn spirits reflect a true cosmic pleasure,
With God’s promise of an eternal love to treasure.
What more could we as mortals hope to aspire to?  

Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved
May 20, 2018 (Verse)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 5/16/2020 5:51:00 PM
I love your line, "Knowing that God’s love shall desert us never." Enjoy your weekend............
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Gary Bateman
Date: 5/17/2020 8:50:00 AM
Hello Paula, Thanks very much for your comment here. Yes, the fourth verse of my poem here is key since it speaks to "God's love" in particular. The same relevance and logic applies to to "God's promise" in the sixth verse. Both speak to a certain balance and symmetry regarding my intended message with this poem. Best Always, Gary
Date: 5/16/2020 9:30:00 AM
Nice one...
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Gary Bateman
Date: 5/16/2020 9:35:00 AM
This one Arturo is kinder and gentler than the other poem I posted on the "Piper-Viper" theme. I am grateful for your read and comment!! Best Always, Gary
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