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In My Grooves

Find me here Within graphite words breathe me deeply until the lines are blurred let my smoke fill your lungs I desperately want to be felt and heard Ash rises from my bones from my mind to your heart transferred my thoughts are paper thin Yet they levitate upon my imperfections Two three and four dimensions The things I can't scream without fear here I mention Maybe it's all a cry for attention is it really me these absurd expressions I lay it out for the world Find the holes in my communication plug in your extension Maybe the light from your lamp will illuminate my apprehension My record silently skips a soundless sensation The needle gouges deep with its intimate groove penetrations Is this any indication of my faltering perceptions or do I have frayed wires stripped by my preoccupation So here now and from yesterday I form words into weird collections maybe you can find me here amidst my verbose fascination I'm here somewhere in all of these indentations!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2017 3:35:00 PM

so clever how you did all those "ation" rhymes and used metaphor and great imagery in this one, Richard. GREAT poetry. seven!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/16/2017 7:51:00 AM

Good morning Andrea, thanks for the visit and seven. ;0)

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/13/2017 3:18:00 PM

A deeply soulful piece... to be accepted and embraced "as is" is really a gift we give to ourselves and each other. You are so wonderful at conveying emotions and meaning that have such a positive and healing impact on the world. Excellent writing, 7+ always a pleasure to read, learn and be reminded of what's important from you Richard :-) blessings, lynn

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2017 8:58:00 AM

You are kind Lynn Marie.

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/6/2017 2:45:00 PM

You express your imperfections in the most perfect way, Richard! Love the groovy connections here :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/9/2017 9:03:00 PM

Thanks Laura ;0)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/6/2017 8:47:00 AM

In one of my poems I wrote that I saw beauty in her imperfections. This applies to all of us. There are moments when we feel the need for reassurance, to be heard, and to be understood. Let us walk with open eyes and ears...many seek our attention. // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2017 8:51:00 AM

Very nicely said Paul.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/5/2017 9:13:00 PM

I'll always search for you...Loved this piece. Much of it is a reflection of how I write. We interact with text on a very personal level. My interactions with your words are always satisfactory. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2017 1:19:00 AM

I do appreciate your words as well. A big hug back to you.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/5/2017 10:37:00 AM

enjoyed how you expressed beauty in imperfections...surely grooving with this one, rich.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2017 10:44:00 AM

Thanks Nette! Hugs back to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2017 5:03:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Richard ... (you leave your heart and your soul ... really !!! ... wooow !!!) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) # 7

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2017 10:45:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise. ;0)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/4/2017 7:47:00 PM

For the record, I loved this!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/4/2017 8:08:00 PM

Thanks Arthur for the Groovy comment!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/4/2017 5:18:00 PM

Hi Richard, this is a wonderful expression of the feelings that go into a poem when written from the heart, and I agree with Tim, the imperfections can make the best most, most honest poetry..thanks for the visit today and lovely comment. I've never been to Italy, but I hope to go one day. Hugs, Rhonda

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/4/2017 5:54:00 PM

My pleasure Rhonda. Hugs back to you.

Darren White

Date: 3/4/2017 2:15:00 PM

This is so expertly and emotionally expressed what it is to give yourself away in a poem, with the doubts, fears, and elation you can feel. And I love the indentations. Beautiful poetry.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/4/2017 5:54:00 PM

Thanks Darren, as always I appreciate your visits.

Judy Ball

Date: 3/4/2017 10:18:00 AM

When a poet shows you his writings he shows you his soul. A poet is an open book to any who will read and by reading know him. Great job here Richard. God Bless, JB

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/4/2017 5:55:00 PM

God bless you as well Judy. ;0)

Tim Smith

Date: 3/4/2017 10:03:00 AM

All the imperfections make it genuine and more desirable...terrific

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/4/2017 5:56:00 PM

I have lots of imperfection to draw upon. Thanks Tim.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/4/2017 9:44:00 AM

Hi Richard, you have found your groove with poetic excellence. Your words just sing off the page as they always do. You always write your feelings so well. This sounds like a poem of your poetic journey. Excellent as always Richard. Your Friend....Mike. Has to be a seven and a fave.

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/4/2017 9:31:00 AM

Nicely put, well written with poetic flare. Your emotions and wit wrap themselves around your words and we are left in awe. Emile.