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In My Eyes

I’m surrounded by your airy essence You taste my skin I feel your salted tongue Your mist fogs my eyes with bubbles Hissing as they disappear into air Only to return when you touch my face I hear you speak to the cloudy sky As you tumble towards my toes Only to run back to the sea and laugh

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Date: 8/14/2020 9:29:00 AM
Love this.
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Date: 6/25/2020 1:44:00 PM
Oh dear.. What a lovely piece you have here. Your craft is definitely seasoned with lots of creativity. Great poem.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/25/2020 3:14:00 PM
:D Thanks so much Funom. Have a lovely day!
Date: 6/22/2020 5:44:00 PM
My spidey sense tells me that maybe you just got hit with a wave? Well, even if that's not it, I just love all the sensations you describe of being at the sea. Nice one, Jeanne! Hugs ~ John
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/23/2020 8:29:00 AM
Yes, the wave shot through my legs and hit my friend directly in the face...
Date: 6/21/2020 10:31:00 PM
This is what I call Lovely! Capital L! Beautiful, metaphorical, and sprinkled with some romantic pixie dust. Thanks, Gershon
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/23/2020 8:27:00 AM
Ahhh...thanks Gershon. A lovely walk none the less.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/23/2020 8:27:00 AM
Ahhh...thanks Gershon. A lovely walk none the less.
Date: 6/21/2020 5:39:00 PM
Hello Jeannie McGee, now that is what I call a tease. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 6/21/2020 2:10:00 PM
Great use of metaphor...I see you were inspired
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/23/2020 8:26:00 AM
absolutely! :D
Date: 6/21/2020 2:09:00 PM
Beautiful... a treasure to cherish, your beautiful expression here. God bless you, sweet lady, with love and prayers, Gina
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