Brendan Solomon Poet Rhyme

In My Dreams:

If I could show my feelings,
I'd paint them in the sky,
In words so large, that you could see,
A tear fall from my eye.

My heart it pounds like thunder,
My tears are falling rain,
As now I know I'll have to wait,
Until we meet again.

We somehow found each other,
So many dreams came true,
The sun exploded in my soul,
The moment I met you.

So all I want to say,
Now time is standing still,
Is now you're living in my heart,
And that you always will.

1996

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Lifes' Tapestry October 11, 2018 at 4:51 AM A lover :) Brendan Solomon October 11, 2018 at 4:51 PM Yes my first true love who died tragically way too young.. One day I’ll see her again :)

Carole Duet April 29, 2017 at 7:16 PM What a lovely poem, Brendan!

Scott Thirtyseven February 15, 2017 at 7:08 AM Just love the love, and thanks for the smile that your fair words have given me.

Carole Duet January 18, 2017 at 12:05 AM Lovely and very romantic, Brendan. And, welcome to Poetry Soup. I know you'll enjoy it. Carole Duet Brendan Solomon January 18, 2017 at 1:16 AM Thanks so much Carole for the lovely words. Poetry soup is amazing.. :-)

Newton Ranaweera December 25, 2016 at 9:30 PM Your are a great painter. Beautifully written with good rhyming and mellifluous words. Brendan Solomon January 18, 2017 at 1:17 AM Thankyou so much for your kind words.. :-)

Sandra Haight December 11, 2016 at 7:22 PM Such a lovely, romantic, and well-written poem, Brendan, with great meter and rhyme! Wonderful! 7 Sandra Brendan Solomon December 12, 2016 at 6:26 AM Thankyou Sandra for the encouragement it means so much as I am new to this :-)

Darren White December 10, 2016 at 11:35 AM What a sweet romantic poem. I like it very much, time to go read your other poem now :) Brendan Solomon December 12, 2016 at 6:30 AM Thankyou Darren such lovely words.. Cheers mate :-)

White Wolf December 2, 2016 at 6:58 AM G'day mate! It's me again! haha. I can see that you are on the soup currently! Good to see! Look forward to more of your work!

Tatianna Leachet November 29, 2016 at 5:55 AM Such a nice poem. I enjoyed it greatly :) Brendan Solomon December 1, 2016 at 5:09 PM Thankyou Tatianna you are very kind :-)

White Wolf November 26, 2016 at 11:02 PM Black Hawk Up on this one Bran. A great first offering my friend. Love it. /|\ Brendan Solomon November 29, 2016 at 5:15 AM Thanks mate twas a mushy time many moons ago :-)