In My Dreams:

If I could show my feelings,
I'd paint them in the sky,
In words so large, that you could see,
A tear fall from my eye.

My heart it pounds like thunder,
My tears are falling rain,
As now I know I'll have to wait,
Until we meet again.

We somehow found each other,
So many dreams came true,
The sun exploded in my soul,
The moment I met you.

So all I want to say,
Now time is standing still,
Is now you're living in my heart,
And that you always will.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 10/11/2018 4:51:00 AM
A lover :)
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Brendan Solomon
Date: 10/11/2018 4:51:00 PM
Yes my first true love who died tragically way too young.. One day I’ll see her again :)
Date: 4/29/2017 7:16:00 PM
What a lovely poem, Brendan!
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Date: 2/15/2017 7:08:00 AM
Just love the love, and thanks for the smile that your fair words have given me.
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Date: 1/18/2017 12:05:00 AM
Lovely and very romantic, Brendan. And, welcome to Poetry Soup. I know you'll enjoy it. Carole Duet
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Brendan Solomon
Date: 1/18/2017 1:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Carole for the lovely words. Poetry soup is amazing.. :-)
Date: 12/25/2016 9:30:00 PM
Your are a great painter. Beautifully written with good rhyming and mellifluous words.
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Brendan Solomon
Date: 1/18/2017 1:17:00 AM
Thankyou so much for your kind words.. :-)
Date: 12/11/2016 7:22:00 PM
Such a lovely, romantic, and well-written poem, Brendan, with great meter and rhyme! Wonderful! 7 Sandra
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Brendan Solomon
Date: 12/12/2016 6:26:00 AM
Thankyou Sandra for the encouragement it means so much as I am new to this :-)
Date: 12/10/2016 11:35:00 AM
What a sweet romantic poem. I like it very much, time to go read your other poem now :)
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Brendan Solomon
Date: 12/12/2016 6:30:00 AM
Thankyou Darren such lovely words.. Cheers mate :-)
Date: 12/2/2016 6:58:00 AM
G'day mate! It's me again! haha. I can see that you are on the soup currently! Good to see! Look forward to more of your work!
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Date: 11/29/2016 5:55:00 AM
Such a nice poem. I enjoyed it greatly :)
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Brendan Solomon
Date: 12/1/2016 5:09:00 PM
Thankyou Tatianna you are very kind :-)
Date: 11/26/2016 11:02:00 PM
Black Hawk Up on this one Bran. A great first offering my friend. Love it. /|\
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Brendan Solomon
Date: 11/29/2016 5:15:00 AM
Thanks mate twas a mushy time many moons ago :-)
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