In My Dreams

In my dreams we sing and play, Chase each other like we once did. lying on the hill at night we would dream about another life. A place beyond the stars, a place that only we knew of. We grew up and our priorities changed I never expected our paths would not cross again nor did I picture bars separating us. In my dreams is where we meet It's the only way to touch your face, see your smile and hold your hand for we are living in different lands. You are my brother and brother you'll be and I will see you again in my dreams...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/11/2013 10:19:00 AM
i agree with the comment here, this is exceptional poetry cory, so powerful and so profound...
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Date: 6/7/2013 6:29:00 AM
- A very pleasant dream poem Cory! - Thank you - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/7/2013 12:27:00 AM
cory, I finally saw you wrote on my blog. I always forget to check them out when they have scrolled down so far. thanks for your comment. I was a little quiet too.
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Date: 6/6/2013 6:30:00 PM
this is really a good one of yours, dear. gotta fave this one!
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Date: 6/6/2013 4:57:00 AM
Beautiful Cory.
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Date: 6/5/2013 10:46:00 AM
hauntingly beautiful in both flow of words and substance.. soft and eternally dreamy, cory.. grreat stuff!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/5/2013 7:12:00 AM
A dream making reality live in our hearts the way we wish to, no matter the place no matter the time, here or in the beyond! Human-too-human verse full of warmth, care, respect and love! Excellent work! Thank you for your visit. If visit again try to find: What AM I and KNOW THYSELF for more details on your comment! Thank you again Cory!
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Date: 6/5/2013 6:03:00 AM
This is a very tenderhearted write my friend, speaking of dreams and love is quite a special occurrence that not just anyone can have! I loved reading this incredible write Cory this morning! What a tremendous poem , such a lovely piece, Great Work!!
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