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In My Dreams

      The grass is greener
where I live inside my dreams
      without the internet

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Bill Baker

January 1, 2024 at 10:40 PM

Nice Senryu, Jerry. I like my dreams better than the internet too. Bill

Jerry Brotherton

January 2, 2024 at 7:27 PM

Definitely more exciting sometimes.

Gershon Wolf

January 1, 2024 at 7:15 PM

Love that last line, hypocrite that I am, pounding away here on the keys of my computer... Still, your words sure do resonate...

Jerry Brotherton

January 2, 2024 at 7:29 PM

Same here. Using an online dictionary and Thesaurus. Reading wonderful poetry on Poetry Soup. Yet I don't need internet...

Sara Kendrick

January 1, 2024 at 4:51 AM

LOL..I don't know what is happening inside my dreams. LOL..Some nights they are not one for regular TV more like a horror movie. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Jerry Brotherton

January 1, 2024 at 5:34 PM

Thanks, Sara. Not for regular TV...hilarious.