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In My Dreams

The grass is greener where I live inside my dreams without the internet

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Bill Baker

Date: 1/1/2024 10:40:00 PM

Nice Senryu, Jerry. I like my dreams better than the internet too. Bill

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/2/2024 7:27:00 PM

Definitely more exciting sometimes.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/1/2024 7:15:00 PM

Love that last line, hypocrite that I am, pounding away here on the keys of my computer... Still, your words sure do resonate...

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/2/2024 7:29:00 PM

Same here. Using an online dictionary and Thesaurus. Reading wonderful poetry on Poetry Soup. Yet I don't need internet...

Tom Woody

Date: 1/1/2024 5:58:00 AM

You present an interesting thought Jerry, ie, does the internet enhance or detract from our happiness in life? I suppose it depends on the individual

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/1/2024 5:37:00 PM

I think it all depends on if we use it as a tool or a distraction. I personally might have a hard time giving it up.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/1/2024 5:27:00 AM

insightful words, Jerry. Perhaps we all need less internet in 2024. Have a blessed new year, Sara

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/1/2024 5:35:00 PM

Except for Poetry Soup, of course.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/1/2024 4:51:00 AM

LOL..I don't know what is happening inside my dreams. LOL..Some nights they are not one for regular TV more like a horror movie. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/1/2024 5:34:00 PM

Thanks, Sara. Not for regular TV...hilarious.

Deb M

Date: 1/1/2024 4:36:00 AM

Beautifully and simply said Brother Jerry! The way it should be…. Sister Deb!! Haha…..

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/1/2024 5:26:00 PM

Thanks Sis. Always a pleasure.

Silent One

Date: 1/1/2024 4:32:00 AM

Beautiful imagery! The contrast between the vibrant 'grass' inside dreams and the absence of the internet is striking... Happy new year my friend.

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/1/2024 5:25:00 PM

Thank you, Silent One.