In My Dreams

I miss you with each passing day
                                   I see you as the sun begins to rise;
                    Through the breeze, I can hear the words you used to say,
                                    When shadows fall and evenings nigh,
                                    Of you I dream, as I close my eyes.








Date: Feb. 23, 2022
For: A Brian Strand Shortie Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Placed 1st in contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 4:03 AM
A nicely done Quintain catching Brian's fancy for a win, my compliments, Paula, Aloha~William!
Calasibetta Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 10:17 AM
Thanks William~Glad I had a placement in the contest. I appreciate you stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Baker Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 2:47 PM
Back to congratulate you on the win! Yeah!!! Bill
Calasibetta Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 10:18 AM
Thanks Bill~It is nice to enjoy a win now and then. You are so supportive, always cheering me on! Blessings,Paulette
Baker Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 2:46 PM
Memories are powerful things. Nice poem, Paulette. Hugs, Bill
Calasibetta Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 10:19 AM
Glad you like it. Blessings,Paulette
Goff Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 2:20 PM
Well deserved win Paulette, romantic dream
Calasibetta Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 10:20 AM
Hi Jim~Thanks~ you are always so supportive and positive ~ romance comes and goes but the heart always remembers. :)Paulette
Gauthier Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 11:57 PM
Beautiful, Paulette ~
Calasibetta Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 6:36 AM
Thank you Line~glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 5:01 PM
This is so romantic and beautiful Paulette. I love it. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving top win. Blessings xxoo
Calasibetta Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 6:37 AM
Thank you Connie~Spring is in the air and romance is alive! Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 4:22 PM
Hello Paulette, oh such a beautiful dream.Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 1:17 PM
Hello Paulette, oh, that is wonderful. I get dreams of romance to and i never see his face. Hugs Darlene
Calasibetta Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 6:38 AM
Yes, a beautiful dream of romance that remains alive. Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Hankins Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 11:29 AM
Beautiful, Paulette. I have experienced that, too, so I could relate.
Calasibetta Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 12:45 PM
Thank you Milton~experiences run deep. :)Paulette
Y. Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 10:02 AM
WoW! Paulette, Your four lines were meaningful and had much impact. Well done. Best wishes in the contest-Alexis
Calasibetta Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 11:11 AM
Hello again, thank you for your encouraging comments. :)Paulette
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