In My Dream

In my dream I dreamt
I was with someone
The face was clouded
So i did not know
Who this person was

His clouded shape showed
He was average height
it was all I've seen 
Of  his body shape
I've seen in my dream

He called out my name
I was so surprised
All I  did was stared
Pondered who he was
I could not recall

He  said he knew me
We met long ago
I could not think of
Who this person was
He knew who I  was


I  could not conclude
Who this person  is
I am waiting to dream 
For him to reveal
Who  he is to me
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Date: 9/6/2025 12:52:00 AM
A very unique poem on dreams tbh. I liked how decide to wait for him at the end. Have a great day Darlene/ the bloody pen/.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/6/2025 11:04:00 AM
Hello The Bloody Pen, Yes I am waiting to see what happens. I hope to have this dream again so he whoever he is, will reveal himself. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 8/2/2025 11:17:00 AM
That's a brilliant write. I truly enjoyed reading it. Best wishes ..!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/2/2025 4:27:00 PM
Hello Pagnhunda, So nice to see you. Thank you for this wonderful comment. Enjoy your evening. Best wishes my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 7/8/2025 2:50:00 AM
A mystery, yet feels very close. Dreams give us hope :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/8/2025 9:52:00 AM
Hello Dr. Vandana Sharma, Yes Vandana it does feel vey close. Yes dreams does gives us hope. Your friend, /Darlene/
Date: 7/5/2025 10:18:00 AM
Dear Darlene, this is a wonderful narrative of your dream. I hope your dream continues so you can solve the mystery of the man in your dream. A lovely poem, dear Darlene. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/5/2025 11:54:00 AM
Hello Susan, I have not had this dream in a long time. I am hoping to have this drfeam again without fog, so i can see who this person is. Warm wishes. I hope your 4th of July celebrtion went well. I hope you had fun. /Darlene/
Date: 7/2/2025 3:05:00 PM
I really like this one. Very unique
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/2/2025 4:03:00 PM
Hello andrea, thank you Andrea. I am trying to figure out what this dream means. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 6/29/2025 7:19:00 AM
Hello Darlene, a beautiful, dreamy poem Have a nice day
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/29/2025 7:56:00 AM
Hello Mulu I hope all is well with you. Thank yu for the lovely com,ment. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 6/28/2025 5:19:00 AM
Mysterious! But sweet and tender! Probably a friend from childhood? Love, Darlene.
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Palak Dadhich
Date: 7/13/2025 11:54:00 PM
I think too,sometimes our consious mind forget informations,while,subconscious mind reveal it again in dreams. Love from Rajasthan!/palak dadhich/ Where are you from in India?
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/28/2025 10:03:00 AM
Hello Mala, yes it could be. yet I still dol not know who this person is. Love & Friendship /Darlene/
Date: 6/27/2025 5:03:00 PM
A sweet dream of a poem, my friend. Sort of a mystery. :-) I enjoyed reading your poetry again. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/28/2025 10:06:00 AM
Hello bill , Oh, hello my friend. Yes it is a mystery. i am still trying to figure it out. I will be reading hour poetry soon. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 6/21/2025 1:18:00 AM
HELLO DARLENE MY DEAREST FRIEND... HE WAS AN ANGEL ! ANGEL DE TU GUARDIA... A DIVINE FRIEND ! GOOD DREAM, GOD BLESS YOU, ALKAS
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/21/2025 6:54:00 AM
Hello Alkas, my friend, Oh a guardian angel, A friend in an angel form? I guess that could be possible. Thank you. my friend. god bless you. /Darleene/
Date: 6/10/2025 2:14:00 PM
Interesting ! I hope you find out who it is :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/10/2025 3:16:00 PM
Hello Heidi, I am hoping to have the dream again to see who the person is. I would the dream to be without the fog. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 6/9/2025 4:57:00 PM
The great reveal…come out of the shadows!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/10/2025 3:17:00 PM
Hello Kim, I hope the shadows reveals the person. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 6/4/2025 10:54:00 AM
It is always a wonder who the mystery person is in our dreams. Often dreams will reveal themselves to us. Enjoyed this poem love phyl
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/7/2025 12:46:00 PM
Hello Phyllis, How are the fires doing in your area? I hope you and family are okay. I could not see the face because of the fog. I am hoping the dream returns and I am able to see the face. I would like to know who the person is. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 6/4/2025 5:57:00 AM
Dear Darlene, O' how your word drifts with the gentle mystery of dreams, so soft, searching... I felt the longing to recognize a face just out of reach, the wonder and patience in waiting for meaning to reveal itself. It seems to be a place where the heart listens for answers only dreams can bring. Such a tender journey that sometimes, the unknown visitor is a promise yet to be. Spring Blessings, My Dear Darlene, Daniel
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/4/2025 9:58:00 AM
Hello Daniel Henry, Yes there is patience waiting for the meaning to reveal itself. It does seem to be a place where the heart listens for answers only dreams can bring. I think the journey will reveal the unknown vistor that knows me. Blessings my frind. /Darlene/
Date: 6/3/2025 7:31:00 PM
I enjoyed this. Hmm, what a mystery! I wonder who it is? I wonder if your mind blocked it out?
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/4/2025 9:51:00 AM
Hello David Crandall, No it was not my mind that blocked it out. It was the fog. I could see the shape of the body in the fog. I could not see the face. so for me it is a mystery. I have no idea who this person is. All i know is that he knows me and knew my name . Enjoy your day my friend. /Darene/
Date: 6/2/2025 1:12:00 AM
Very original. I always dream of dead people. Still I loved your poem, though I think it will remain a mystery.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/2/2025 5:17:00 AM
Hello Victor, I agree with you Victor. Unless thew fog lifts away to reveal who he is. I do not dream of dead people. thank you for tie lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 5/31/2025 10:39:00 PM
Dear Darlene, what a beautifully nostalgic poem you've written! I hope you find out who he is, then I think we'll get part 2 of this poem. Best, Anne
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Anne Winter
Date: 6/2/2025 7:26:00 AM
Thank you so much for the kind wishes, dear Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/1/2025 10:35:00 AM
Hello Anne Winter, Welcome to poetry soup. Best wishes /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/1/2025 10:33:00 AM
Hello Ann Winter, so nice to meet you. Thank you for the wonderful comment. I hoping to find out who the3 person is. When I find out , I will do a part 2. No luck yet Anne Best wishes /Darlene
Date: 5/30/2025 5:31:00 AM
Maybe it is someone you loved in a past life, keep the dream alive dear heart. Maybe some day you will meet him in this lifetime.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/30/2025 9:43:00 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, I will keep the dream alive. yes maybe i will meet him in this life time. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 5/29/2025 7:57:00 PM
How nice to have something to look forward to when hitting the pillow! ~ Night fancies, Gershon
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/30/2025 9:41:00 AM
Hello Gershon, yes it is nice to have3 something to look fprward to when hitting the pillow. I hope the dream returns. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 5/28/2025 2:47:00 PM
What a fascinating dream! I liked it.. Pangie with hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/28/2025 3:22:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, Thank you Panagiota. Hugs. xxx /Darlene,
Date: 5/28/2025 1:35:00 PM
- Hope he comes back in your dreams... a mysterious poem... I enjoyed reading, Darlene :) - hugs
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/28/2025 3:25:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, thank you Sunshine Smile. I hope he dows come back, i want to find out who he is. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 5/28/2025 1:24:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "In My Dream" write. Great Ending... Have a fun day writing away.........
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/28/2025 3:26:00 PM
Hello Paula, Enjoy your time writing away. Hugs. /Darlene/
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