In My Dream

In my dream…

In my dream, I can fly,
  hug the moon kiss the sky.
I will drink, morning dew,
  I get drunk, to get by.
In my dream, world is mine,
  laugh, I’ll be, no more cry.
In my dream, I’ll see you,
  cross my heart hope to die.
In my thoughts, kiss your lips,
  till sunrise, I will try.
Every day, every night,
  only us, you and I.
“Haloo” said, go and fly,
  I will wait, don't know why.

6/24/20 Haloo

Note: This poem is the shortest form of "Ghazal" with 6 syllables in each line (it can vary from 6-24).  The rhyming in Ghazal ends with AA bA cA dA eA etc. It comes in two different forms with and without refrain. This particular Ghazal is without refrain. In a ghazal, the poet usually places his/her alias in the last line and becomes a part of the poem.   (Poetrysoup has a great explanation for this form of poetry).
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Proxenos Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 1:18 PM
I love the rhythm and the rhyme of this write, it has a beat of its own, a tempo of talent, and a bunch full of imagery! Great write Pashang. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Juman Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 9:43 AM
Now she will find you-----Excellent my friend
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 6:01 AM
Hello Pashang, in our dreams we can do anything .Be anywhere. Some dreams feel real it feels like being there. Enjoy your day my friend.
Beaufort Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Ahh--dreaming and love are wonderful. Taking the first step and the last one is hard. It' something to think about--thanks for that. I'm thinking about hesitation thanks to this!!
Moss Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 8:03 AM
This is great! I like the thoughts and am happy to learn about this form. Thanks!
Salehi Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Thank you, Mr. Moss
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 12:20 PM
- A beautiful poem, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Salehi Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Thanks, Anne Lise
One Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 8:43 AM
Your ghazals always flow so well
Salehi Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 11:36 AM
Thanks my friend
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 2:49 PM
I can't believe I missed this gem from the master of the Ghazal you always fly high my beautiful butterfly friend, into my faves... hope you are keeping well Pashang:-) hugs jan xx
Salehi Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 11:36 AM
Thanks Jan
Raiser Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 12:33 PM
I have become fascinated with this form, This is a wonderful and enlightening poem.
Salehi Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 11:36 AM
thank you
Daniel Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 4:50 AM
Wow! Love this short ghazal, Pashang, you are a master of English ghazals:)
Salehi Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 10:34 AM
You are too kind Jo... thank you...
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 9:03 PM
I really really like this short form. It is awesome, Pashang.
Salehi Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 12:57 PM
thanks Andrea... you are a great friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 5:27 AM
Very nicely done! I’ve written a couple ghazals. Blessings!
Salehi Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 12:57 PM
Thanks Kim, you are so kind...
Wolf Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 9:18 PM
This is such a pretty poem, Pashang: Light as a feather; sentiments deep as the recesses of one's heart. Superb! Peace and Tranquility, Gershon
Salehi Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 12:56 PM
Thank you my friend.
Wolf Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 9:04 PM
This is such a pretty poem, Pashang: Light as a feather; sentiments deep as the recesses of one's heart. Superb! Peace and Tranquility, Gershon
Rose  Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 6:46 PM
Your poem sounds so very passionate, thats what true romance is all about, xo
Salehi Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 12:56 PM
Thanks Pixie...
May Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Very nicely penned Pashang, I haven't done a Ghazal in a while...
Salehi Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 12:56 PM
thanks... let me know when you write one.
B. Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 3:21 PM
I generally believe that everything and anything is possible in dreams.. Amazing write, my friend.. Really enjoyed your exquisite ghazal! Blessings!
Salehi Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 12:55 PM
Lovely Robertina... thank you.
Horsman Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 10:20 PM
LOve this wonderful positive poetry, Pashang
Salehi Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 12:55 PM
Thanks Harry.
Maverick Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 2:27 PM
Quite a write Pashang, really good flow Strikes chords in my consciousness Well done.'
Salehi Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 12:54 PM
Thanks Joe... nice hearing from you.
Sediqi Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 11:04 AM
Concise and strong.
Salehi Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 12:54 PM
Thank you Bahram...
Pandit Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 10:12 AM
Quite a tender, dreamy write Pashang--enjoyed the tone and flow of your ghazal.
Salehi Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 12:53 PM
Thanks Vijay
One Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 3:27 PM
I hope you don't have to wait that long...
Salehi Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 12:53 PM
Haha ... thanks
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 7:20 AM
Lucky soul! Dreams are a genuine reality to a deep beautiful heart, artistic mind.. So good is the feeling that we have a world, though intangible, reaches and nourishes the soul! Your great and unique poetry nourishes the reader's heart and mind! An immense pleasure to read, Pashang! My deepest regards and blessings.
Salehi Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 12:52 PM
Thanks my dear friend...
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