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In My Dream

In my dream… In my dream, I can fly, hug the moon kiss the sky. I will drink, morning dew, I get drunk, to get by. In my dream, world is mine, laugh, I’ll be, no more cry. In my dream, I’ll see you, cross my heart hope to die. In my thoughts, kiss your lips, till sunrise, I will try. Every day, every night, only us, you and I. “Haloo” said, go and fly, I will wait, don't know why. 6/24/20 Haloo Note: This poem is the shortest form of "Ghazal" with 6 syllables in each line (it can vary from 6-24). The rhyming in Ghazal ends with AA bA cA dA eA etc. It comes in two different forms with and without refrain. This particular Ghazal is without refrain. In a ghazal, the poet usually places his/her alias in the last line and becomes a part of the poem. (Poetrysoup has a great explanation for this form of poetry).

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Date: 4/25/2022 1:18:00 PM
I love the rhythm and the rhyme of this write, it has a beat of its own, a tempo of talent, and a bunch full of imagery! Great write Pashang. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/11/2021 9:43:00 AM
Now she will find you-----Excellent my friend
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Date: 7/8/2021 6:01:00 AM
Hello Pashang, in our dreams we can do anything .Be anywhere. Some dreams feel real it feels like being there. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 7/7/2021 11:07:00 AM
Ahh--dreaming and love are wonderful. Taking the first step and the last one is hard. It' something to think about--thanks for that. I'm thinking about hesitation thanks to this!!
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Date: 5/10/2021 8:03:00 AM
This is great! I like the thoughts and am happy to learn about this form. Thanks!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/23/2021 11:37:00 AM
Thank you, Mr. Moss
Date: 3/2/2021 12:20:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/23/2021 11:37:00 AM
Thanks, Anne Lise
Date: 8/30/2020 8:43:00 AM
Your ghazals always flow so well
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/23/2021 11:36:00 AM
Thanks my friend
Date: 8/9/2020 2:49:00 PM
I can't believe I missed this gem from the master of the Ghazal you always fly high my beautiful butterfly friend, into my faves... hope you are keeping well Pashang:-) hugs jan xx
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/23/2021 11:36:00 AM
Thanks Jan
Date: 8/7/2020 12:33:00 PM
I have become fascinated with this form, This is a wonderful and enlightening poem.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/23/2021 11:36:00 AM
thank you
Date: 8/7/2020 4:50:00 AM
Wow! Love this short ghazal, Pashang, you are a master of English ghazals:)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/7/2020 10:34:00 AM
You are too kind Jo... thank you...
Date: 7/17/2020 9:03:00 PM
I really really like this short form. It is awesome, Pashang.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/18/2020 12:57:00 PM
thanks Andrea... you are a great friend.
Date: 7/17/2020 5:27:00 AM
Very nicely done! I’ve written a couple ghazals. Blessings!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/18/2020 12:57:00 PM
Thanks Kim, you are so kind...
Date: 7/16/2020 9:18:00 PM
This is such a pretty poem, Pashang: Light as a feather; sentiments deep as the recesses of one's heart. Superb! Peace and Tranquility, Gershon
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/18/2020 12:56:00 PM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 7/16/2020 9:04:00 PM
This is such a pretty poem, Pashang: Light as a feather; sentiments deep as the recesses of one's heart. Superb! Peace and Tranquility, Gershon
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Date: 7/16/2020 6:46:00 PM
Your poem sounds so very passionate, thats what true romance is all about, xo
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/18/2020 12:56:00 PM
Thanks Pixie...
Date: 7/16/2020 5:48:00 PM
Very nicely penned Pashang, I haven't done a Ghazal in a while...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/18/2020 12:56:00 PM
thanks... let me know when you write one.
Date: 7/6/2020 3:21:00 PM
I generally believe that everything and anything is possible in dreams.. Amazing write, my friend.. Really enjoyed your exquisite ghazal! Blessings!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/18/2020 12:55:00 PM
Lovely Robertina... thank you.
Date: 7/5/2020 10:20:00 PM
LOve this wonderful positive poetry, Pashang
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/18/2020 12:55:00 PM
Thanks Harry.
Date: 7/4/2020 2:27:00 PM
Quite a write Pashang, really good flow Strikes chords in my consciousness Well done.'
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/18/2020 12:54:00 PM
Thanks Joe... nice hearing from you.
Date: 7/2/2020 11:04:00 AM
Concise and strong.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/18/2020 12:54:00 PM
Thank you Bahram...
Date: 6/30/2020 10:12:00 AM
Quite a tender, dreamy write Pashang--enjoyed the tone and flow of your ghazal.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/18/2020 12:53:00 PM
Thanks Vijay
Date: 6/25/2020 3:27:00 PM
I hope you don't have to wait that long...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/18/2020 12:53:00 PM
Haha ... thanks
Date: 6/25/2020 7:20:00 AM
Lucky soul! Dreams are a genuine reality to a deep beautiful heart, artistic mind.. So good is the feeling that we have a world, though intangible, reaches and nourishes the soul! Your great and unique poetry nourishes the reader's heart and mind! An immense pleasure to read, Pashang! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/18/2020 12:52:00 PM
Thanks my dear friend...

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