Line Gauthier Poet Haibun

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In My Dream

On the outskirts of Kyoto I meandered as in a dream through a summertime forest intoxicated by a surreal scent of magnificence ~


                                                                        sea of vibrant green
                                                                        bamboo trees
                                                                        rattling in my mind



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

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Caren Krutsinger July 17, 2020 at 2:40 AM Ah, so gorgeous. It makes me want to walk there and soak up the magnificence. Line Gauthier July 17, 2020 at 8:43 AM Thank you, Caren. Let's go for a walk ~

Krish Radhakrishna July 7, 2020 at 2:16 PM A wonderful Haibun bringing a flavour of Japan! A nice example for your contest. Shall try..9 Line Gauthier July 7, 2020 at 8:39 PM Thank you so much, Krish. I am really looking forward to reading all the submissions in my haibun contest. It is a fabulous form.

Kim Rodrigues June 20, 2020 at 6:29 PM Cool imagery! I can hear it! Line Gauthier June 21, 2020 at 4:11 AM Thanks, Kim. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire June 19, 2020 at 9:13 PM I can imaging a rolling sea of green. I like this poem. Line Gauthier June 20, 2020 at 2:11 PM I don't know what bamboo foliage would smell like but I'm sue it would be impressive.

Parvanendu Babu June 19, 2020 at 1:51 AM Great imagery, well presented Line Gauthier June 19, 2020 at 6:10 AM thank you very much ~

Mahtab Bangalee June 19, 2020 at 12:03 AM a dream through a summertime forest intoxicated by a surreal scent....excellent expressive Line Gauthier June 19, 2020 at 12:35 AM Thank you, Mahtab. Much appreciated.