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On the outskirts of Kyoto I meandered as in a dream through a summertime forest intoxicated by a surreal scent of magnificence ~ sea of vibrant green bamboo trees rattling in my mind AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on June 18, 2020

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Date: 7/17/2020 2:40:00 AM
Ah, so gorgeous. It makes me want to walk there and soak up the magnificence.
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Date: 7/17/2020 8:43:00 AM
Thank you, Caren. Let's go for a walk ~
Date: 7/7/2020 2:16:00 PM
A wonderful Haibun bringing a flavour of Japan! A nice example for your contest. Shall try..9
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Date: 7/7/2020 8:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Krish. I am really looking forward to reading all the submissions in my haibun contest. It is a fabulous form.
Date: 6/20/2020 6:29:00 PM
Cool imagery! I can hear it!
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Date: 6/21/2020 4:11:00 AM
Thanks, Kim. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/19/2020 9:13:00 PM
I can imaging a rolling sea of green. I like this poem.
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Date: 6/20/2020 2:11:00 PM
I don't know what bamboo foliage would smell like but I'm sue it would be impressive.
Date: 6/19/2020 1:51:00 AM
Great imagery, well presented
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Date: 6/19/2020 6:10:00 AM
thank you very much ~
Date: 6/19/2020 12:03:00 AM
a dream through a summertime forest intoxicated by a surreal scent....excellent expressive
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Date: 6/19/2020 12:35:00 AM
Thank you, Mahtab. Much appreciated.

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