In My Dream

In my dream, we were all afloat.
My grandpa was riding in a tiny boat.
A whale was lurking big and floppy.
My bed was traveling rather sloppy.

In my dream, there were fish splashing.
They were playing happily, fins a flashing.
The whale had a name, whose name escapes me.
I dozed off happily, in dream land Disney.

We traveled around the world, us five.
Maybe six, I am not sure, but we were all alive.
The whale was gentle, kind, and sweet.
My grandpa’s mustache was better than neat.

We traveled to Barcelona, and Timbuktu,
We met some natives, they were red and blue.
We traveled to Chile, Brazil, Africa, and Peru. 
With an imagination like mine, this is what I do.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ashley Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 10:47 PM
Oh, the adventures! I want to float in your dream with you, Caren. I love dreaming and you captivated me with your delightful and whimsical poem. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
Krutsinger Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 6:15 AM
Thank you Susan. It was just a whim of a dream.
Roper Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 9:59 PM
Great imagination, Caren, love the story. Hugs Eve
Krutsinger Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 6:22 AM
Thank you Eve. I can swear I already typed this. Hmmmmm.
Romios Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 2:24 PM
An enjoyable piem, my friend! Delightful to the max Panagiota
Krutsinger Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 6:24 AM
Thank you my friend. I hope all is well in your warm little state.
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