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In My Cottage Garden

Whispering gossamer wings
flutter on the zephyr breeze
I gaze in awe
as a beautiful butterfly
alights on buddleia blossoms
and marvel
at its bejewelled wings
which resemble a stained glass window

Whispering Wings Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke

01/12/22

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M. L. Kiser Date: 1/17/2022 5:15:00 PM Quite beautiful, I can see this. Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 1/16/2022 5:53:00 AM Beautiful, Jan. Great imagination with the butterflies resembling stained glass windows. Lovely! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs Charlie xx Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 1/15/2022 9:19:00 AM I love this. I love butterflies and stained glass windows too. You have shown it well :) Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 1/15/2022 12:31:00 AM This is a beautiful write Jan. i have one tattooed om my ankle and one on my shoulder,love butterflies, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Login to Reply

Mike Gentile Date: 1/13/2022 10:58:00 AM Beautiful Jan! Butterflies do resemble Satined Glass! Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 1/13/2022 10:19:00 AM Crisply put, Jan! Someone's colouring skills are superb! Aloha! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/13/2022 3:46:00 AM - A beautiful poem, Jan :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/13/2022 12:58:00 AM Extremely beautiful with perfect imagery. Best for a win. Hugs. Login to Reply

Terry Flood Date: 1/12/2022 4:28:00 PM Smashing write, Jan. shame most of my butterflies are cabbage whites ;-) Terry Login to Reply

Lindsay Laurie Date: 1/12/2022 3:41:00 PM Hello Jan ... cottage gardens are the bees knees if you want living rainbows to shroud you - butterflies with you Jan are heavenly - Lindsay Login to Reply

Ronald D Thompson Date: 1/12/2022 2:18:00 PM Excellent Jan. Majestic!! Good luck in the competition but I don't think you will need to rely on luck. Best wishes..Ron x Login to Reply

L Milton Hankins Date: 1/12/2022 2:07:00 PM Exquisite description of the butterfly, Jan. You are so, so talented! I enjoyed it and hope the best for you in the contest. Login to Reply L Milton Hankins Date: 1/12/2022 5:27:00 PM Oh well, as you know, there are some grave disadvantages to getting "back on the top of the list" these days. I just do what I do. Whatever...so be it. Jan Allison Date: 1/12/2022 2:12:00 PM aww Milton you are too kind:-) It is SO good to have you back am sure you will be back on the top of the list very soon xx Sorry I didnt enter your contest