Jan Allison Poet Free verse

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In My Cottage Garden

Whispering gossamer wings
flutter on the zephyr breeze
I gaze in awe
as a beautiful butterfly
alights on buddleia blossoms
and marvel
at its bejewelled wings
which resemble a stained glass window

Whispering Wings Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke

01/12/22

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M. L. Kiser January 17, 2022 at 5:15 PM Quite beautiful, I can see this.

Charles Messina January 16, 2022 at 5:53 AM Beautiful, Jan. Great imagination with the butterflies resembling stained glass windows. Lovely! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs Charlie xx

Heidi Sands January 15, 2022 at 9:19 AM I love this. I love butterflies and stained glass windows too. You have shown it well :)

Jennifer Proxenos January 15, 2022 at 12:31 AM This is a beautiful write Jan. i have one tattooed om my ankle and one on my shoulder,love butterflies, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Mike Gentile January 13, 2022 at 10:58 AM Beautiful Jan! Butterflies do resemble Satined Glass! Good luck in the contest!

Rico Leffanta January 13, 2022 at 10:19 AM Crisply put, Jan! Someone's colouring skills are superb! Aloha!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2022 at 3:46 AM - A beautiful poem, Jan :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar January 13, 2022 at 12:58 AM Extremely beautiful with perfect imagery. Best for a win. Hugs.

Terry Flood January 12, 2022 at 4:28 PM Smashing write, Jan. shame most of my butterflies are cabbage whites ;-) Terry

Lindsay Laurie January 12, 2022 at 3:41 PM Hello Jan ... cottage gardens are the bees knees if you want living rainbows to shroud you - butterflies with you Jan are heavenly - Lindsay

Ronald D Thompson January 12, 2022 at 2:18 PM Excellent Jan. Majestic!! Good luck in the competition but I don't think you will need to rely on luck. Best wishes..Ron x

L Milton Hankins January 12, 2022 at 2:07 PM Exquisite description of the butterfly, Jan. You are so, so talented! I enjoyed it and hope the best for you in the contest. L Milton Hankins January 12, 2022 at 5:27 PM Oh well, as you know, there are some grave disadvantages to getting "back on the top of the list" these days. I just do what I do. Whatever...so be it. Jan Allison January 12, 2022 at 2:12 PM aww Milton you are too kind:-) It is SO good to have you back am sure you will be back on the top of the list very soon xx Sorry I didnt enter your contest