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In My Cocoon

in mommy's tummy
tiny, warm, happy and content			
i felt the surprise at the news and felt loved		
i heard mommy's singing				
	    daddy's voice				
	    reactions to announcements			
	    calling out different baby names		
life was good as i practiced			
	    smiling					
	    laughing					
	    giggling					
	    moving my arms and legs			
	    sucking my thumb				
	    doing somersaults				
	    counting my fingers and toes			
	    recognizing mommy's and daddy's voice		
as my little body grew in the dark		
i dreamt about one day				
	    playing with kittens				
	    petting puppies				
	    playing with gold fish and turtles		
	    reaching out to the moon			
	    splashing in a bubblebath				
	    wearing silly clothes				
	    falling asleep to lullabies			
	    and bedtime stories				
	    playing with toys				
	    playdates at the park			
	    	
	    learning to walk				
	    learning to talk
            learning my numbers and ABC's		
	    climbing trees				
	    chasing butterflies
            flying my first kite				
	    touching and smelling flowers			
	    Easter egg hunts			
	    Christmas mornings			
I felt so much anticipation and love for my arrival		
	    as mommy rocked me on the big chair by my crib	
And then early one morning, 
It was 9 a.m. on March 26, 2017, and it was time...



AP: 3rd place 2020

Submitted on October 9, 2017 for contest WHAT CHILD IS THIS sponsored by CRAIG CORNISH

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/10/2017 5:06:00 PM
The symbolism of Easter is ingenious Line. Your poem is totally awesome and I love your intimate point of view, your hopes and dreams and knowing that you were loved - from the warm cocoon of your Mom's womb - just lovely. Enjoyed (as you can tell lol...!) Good luck in the contest! ~ Susan P.S. I just noticed from the last comment that you were born on Easter..! Still ingenious :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2017 8:04:00 PM
Thank you Susan for giving me so much credit, deserved or not ;-) Warmest wishes from Ottawa.
Date: 10/10/2017 7:36:00 AM
Nice one! Loved even before birth. Born on Easter!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2017 2:16:00 PM
Thanks for you visit Kim. Yes I was born on Easter morning... opted to leave the year out for "esthetics" ;-)

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