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In My Closed Space

In my closed space I am free to shrug off that which I wear To hide my true self; A being which does not belong to this earth But which seeks to find the anchorage Of there where I come from! In my closed space, I am free to be mad, to wish for death, To imagine of myself as being magical, To cry over that which hurts me, To pretend that the years have not worked On the shape of my body And to sing, even if my voice is not trained! In my closed space I can be a bird, mystical, beautiful, Or even a lioness, sleek and dangerous Why, In between the walls of my own space I can even be in love As would a heroine of a romance; Bold even in my fragility Experienced in my innocence And happy in the gloom of impossible love! In this hidden space Life happens as I want it to It dances according to my tunes And sings according to the lyrics that I write In this space, I am free to be who I am!

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Date: 1/12/2025 4:00:00 AM
This poem, Anoucheka, is very interesting. Every stanza speaks such conviction. Which line or stanza is my favorite? Maybe this part, “ To hide my true self; A being which does not belong to this earth But which seeks to find the anchorage Of there where I come from!” I don’t know. I’ve read it several times, and think it is so good.
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Date: 11/5/2024 7:30:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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