In my 2023 Stage Curtain

some bright sequins of fun shined amidst dull threads of routines... art time none
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Agustin Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 7:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Dietrich Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 3:25 PM
Still miss you, sweetie.
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 10:29 PM
Gosh. It's June and still you are gone. Miss you, cutie pie
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 5:01 AM
Hey, girl. Writing any new poems lately?
Baker Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 4:20 PM
Sorry I missed this fine Monoku, Ani. Congratulations on your contest win! I glad you have some "bright sequins of fun" to remember as you begin a new year. Have a great 2024! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Kendrick Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 7:45 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest. Way to go. Great work. Sara K
Miller Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 5:42 AM
Wonderful Monoku; congratulations
Goldsmith Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 8:08 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful Monoku write. You told a story in just one line. Have a blessed day writing away................
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 10:48 AM
Wow, Anitha, you came up on the top of my list. Congrats to you on a well-written sijo. loved your metaphors too
Jayasankar Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:19 PM
Thank you so much dear sponsor for the inspiring contest and my placement. Enjoyed participating. Am glad you liked the metaphors. This is a monoku, not Sijo, sweet Ria. Hugs... ~ Ani
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January 3, 2024 at 9:47 AM
Oh, dear beautiful Anitha, you've so creatively described the shades of 2023 that you experienced, within few words of this monoku.. That's the beauty of poetry and a skillfully talented poetess too.. I hope 2024 brings you so much happiness, magic, peace, enthusiasm, hope and light.. Sending you lots of love and my best wishes to you as well as your family.. May you write many gorgeous creations this year and we get to read more of your wonderful poetry~ :)
Jayasankar Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:16 PM
Dear sweet Hiya, thank you for the visit and your kind words of appreciation of my simple one liner. I wish and hope to write more. My son Ashwin's 10th cbse board exam is nearing...(Feb 21). if only he's a bit more responsible child...sigh. I wish you back lots of love, happiness and creativity in 2024...Hugs...~ Ani
One Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 11:11 AM
Great one liner and i hope its all bright pastels that come your way.. All the best for 2024..
Jayasankar Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 10:15 PM
Thank you so very much for your wishes and blessings dear S1. Wishing you good health, happiness, and peace and an amazing 2024! ~ Ani
Cunningham Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 10:00 PM
I hope there are no dull threads for you Ani in 2024. Wishing you good health and happiness. Tom
Jayasankar Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 1:21 AM
Thank you so very much Tom for the visit and comment. Yes, 2023 was mostly monotonous for me, with some extra duties and responsibilities...though I was cheerfully doing them, I didn't get enough time for my writing or music. Wishing you good health, peace and happiness and an amazing 2024 ~ Ani
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