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In Motion

Profound zealous souls In wonder assuaging beauty thirst Dip hearts in oceans In motion but beauty is! A soul's crave never appeased.

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Silent One

Date: 4/25/2018 5:00:00 PM

Great tanka Besma, you write these so well..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/25/2018 5:25:00 PM

My pleasure Silent One. I'm elated to read your appreciative comment. Thank you so much.

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/25/2018 8:45:00 AM

Each line of your poem is a wonderment of loveliness, Besma. 'Dip hearts in oceans' - pure poetic bliss! I dip my heart in the beauty of your poem.. Your poetic lines speak with sparkling zeal! Warmest wishes, my friend..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/25/2018 5:20:00 PM

Dear Susan so kind of you to spill heartfelt words on my humble soul! Hugs dear friend, I'm overjoyed.

Susan Ashley
Date: 4/25/2018 11:52:00 AM

I feel your essence, Besma and it epitomizes love, kindness and beauty..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/25/2018 10:28:00 AM

Your wonderful feedback and the beauty of your soul outshine my write! So much elated and humbled dear Susan by your genuine and uplifting comment! Thank you so much. My pleasure.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/24/2018 3:13:00 PM

Very deep poem Besma..every word speaks to complexities of soul!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/24/2018 3:33:00 PM

Thank you so much for your uplifting feedback! Deeply humbled! My pleasure.