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Where in the night sky would I seek to find the daughter of love, while Phobos rounds Mars close cheek tho' Deimos breaches slower above. Never wanted to be less than whole lost in a soldier's conquered dreams, like fine wine alas asked to taste all, love's sweet draught in moonbeams. Never harbor a jealous heart only serves to fulfill it's own needs.. to poison love's lasting waters, and steal away bright moonbeams. Laugh at all life's fortunes won those red rosey skies full a sun.. yet all evenings lost it seems.. in moonbeams, bright moonbeams, oh, those moonbeams.

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Date: 1/22/2023 2:01:00 PM
Softly romantic and mystical Richard. Very nice indeed. :)
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Date: 1/17/2023 2:51:00 PM
I love your poetic emphasis on moonbeams. So romantic. Happy new year, Richard!
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Date: 1/16/2023 7:45:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this. Another magnificent muse... Meanwhile, by God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy from the Lord toward a prosperous New Year 2023 along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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Date: 1/13/2023 12:13:00 AM
So very poetic this is. Ahhhhh!
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Date: 1/12/2023 3:23:00 AM
Lovely work beautifully expressed
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Date: 1/4/2023 7:46:00 PM
Good wishes in 2nd stanza with "never wanted to be less than a whole" and good advice in your 3rd stanza.
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Date: 1/4/2023 7:32:00 AM
Oh , I love this. ! Beautifully written. A Fave for me! Happy New Year Richard :)
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Date: 1/3/2023 8:19:00 PM
An enchanting write ~ enjoyed!
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Date: 1/3/2023 8:29:00 PM
Unseeking Seeker, Thankyou for that comment. I fixed the spelling too! -Richard

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