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In Midnight's Absence Of Day

Daisies Crooked, not quite— Each, a garden's seraphs Within ethereal lamp's watch; Praises

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Silent One

Date: 7/26/2024 12:48:00 PM

Woah... awesome imagery... one of best cinquain i have read..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2024 2:11:00 PM

I thought of the same word to use as Deb here: lovely!

Deb M

Date: 7/23/2024 7:36:00 AM

Just lovely Paige! Debx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/21/2024 2:39:00 PM

Good one. Aren't daisies beautiful. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/21/2024 8:19:00 AM

Your poem provided me with a beautiful image. Well done.

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/21/2024 5:55:00 AM

great imagery, enjoyed yann

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 7/21/2024 5:08:00 AM

a striking image, very pretty :)

Ink Empress

Date: 7/20/2024 10:58:00 PM

Wow this is absolutely stunning! I love this cinquain so well woven and how you’ve also used daisies at midnight and ethereal lamp! Creative! Pleasure reading you sweet paige: sending you light always

Paige Hind
Date: 7/21/2024 3:43:00 PM

Thank you for this coming to my attention that this was indeed more of a cinquain...I changed it accordingly, to fit the form. :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/20/2024 8:30:00 PM

I enjoy this poetic nighttime scene.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 7/20/2024 5:35:00 PM

Very lovely!

Tom Woody

Date: 7/20/2024 5:18:00 PM

Praises for daisies, gotta love it

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/20/2024 4:36:00 PM

An ' ethereal lantern. ' So beautiful and uplifting, Paige. Your thoughts are soft and delicate. My heart is smiling. :) Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy