In Memory Of**pt 2
Reluctantly,
I gave her my rough draft.
An hour later she returned,
handing me my paper marked in red,
She said:
"Have you ever tried poetry?"
"You certainly have a way with words.
I think you would make an incredible poet with the right mentor!!
Come to my house on Saturday night,
I would like to show you something!!"
Within the work day I had written my first poem, "Obsessed".
Short, sweet in freestyle form,
something like a Senryu.
Sensual, creative
Asavvy1 had made his debut.
thoughts begin to brew.
daily,
I'd write two.
Consuelo,
my muse,
who,
helped rouse my creativity,
who,
gave me life when I was blue.
*** That Saturday night inspired the following poems***
Obsessed
Night Cap ( all three versions)
The Dance,
The Date,
& The Engagement.
*** Reading these poems will conclude this tribute to my Consuelo.......***
Jared Pickett
12/29/09
Asavvy1
Copyright © Jared Pickett | Year Posted 2009
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