In Memory of Romeo

If the sun sets before I die, allow me to say that I am love
For if my heart could speak, you too would know of love

See you not, for my heart weeps and it's tears fun and fall still in my soul
I miss her so bad, she is my whole world, and I nothing without her

Her smile is the image that portrays my ultimate happiness to love her forever
And I cry for tomorrow and her are not promised to me

For as long as I breathe I lover her more and more each day
My God I beg you, take this cup from mine hand and allow me to make her happy

I cant do this without her, I love her with all that I am
In your image I love, and in your grace I can have her and guide her in this life
Please, take my life if I cant have her, for this life without her isnt life at all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/2/2010 10:09:00 AM
Edward, nice to see you posting.. Loved and enjoyed. Deep and full of strength,..Leeann
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Date: 9/2/2010 3:48:00 AM
Hi Eddie,poet of passion and light. .you're still loving the girl and i can understand how you are feeling,give it time and all will heal. .and the sadness of today will be just a memory of yesterday and tomorrow the sun will shine again.Romeo is fiction but eduardo was born to live. .smile little brother. .C.C
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Date: 9/1/2010 8:49:00 PM
Dear Edward, I hope you are not really feeling this way right now. But if you are, remember, there are times when we all mourn for love that is not returned to us. The last line is especially sad. Is there anything I can do to help? It's good to see you posting again, but it would be a shame if you are going through something like this right now. I am here if you wish to talk. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 9/1/2010 7:25:00 PM
Intense and sad Edward but enjoyable for its passionate nature... enjoyed with luv..
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