In Memory of My Mum

Original version january 2015

Though I fear she's gone forever
and her smile I cannot see
I still have so many moments
when I feel her here with me

she seems to show me things are just fine
and we'll meet again someday
and now i know, though I cant see her
it doesn't mean she's gone away

Our memories I will keep forever
and even though we are apart
She may reside among the angels
but she lives within my heart.



Revised Version March 2015


It once seemed she had gone forever
her smile I could no longer see
Her voice no longer spoke her blessings
Her arms had ceased to comfort me

At times when I was feeling so low
when sadness loomed so endlessly
I'd pray for just one final moment
It's her I'd seek, yet could not see

There are still so many moments
when I fear what is unknown
And if I could walk right up to heaven
I'd go right now and bring her home

but we can't change the way things happen
Cannot choose the way things are
We can only hope and pray our loved ones
Shine like diamonds 'midst the stars

Our memories are mine forever
and even now, so far apart
while she's dancing with the angels
she still sings within my heart.



Until we meet again... I love you mum ***
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Lindley Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 2:03 PM
Sorry that I am so late on the congrats, just recently found out the contest was finalized.. Big congrats on your win!!
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April 18, 2015 at 5:33 PM
Congratulations... Linda
Guzzi Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 11:53 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Relish Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 3:04 AM
Shows how close you were with your mother, the memories keeps u still close to her ... hugs
Pinet Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 8:31 AM
The magic that exist in your life is personified in the closeness you feel with your mother and this is skillfully incorporated into a beautiful unique poem honoring her with your words. Emile.
Jennings Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 8:52 AM
thank you :)
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