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In Memory of My Moon Flower

In winter they cried ice cold tears, each one shattered like glass as they flowed steady and fast. Blue I feel, as I lost the warmth of the sun upon your chilling kiss. My white gown grew its roots upon your barren ground, it bloomed on the night when the moon shined full and bright. I your moon flower beamed bursting forth, as my petals fly free, they die before they freeze; hitting the chilled earth with a dreadful thud. Memory of you; My ghost flowers grew upon the memories we grow and cultivate; as the stars bare witness to our chaotic dance. _______________________ This was written after I left my mother's deathbed, she was my moon flower. Her memory will forever be engraved upon my heart and in my tears.

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Date: 6/19/2017 12:28:00 AM
Hello Amanda, thank you for commenting on my poem, that's how I found you. Normally I welcome all new poets, but I was away for a little while. This is a beautiful poem, so warm, and loving. It must have been very painful to write, and difficult to post. I wish you a belated welcome to PoetrySoup.
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Amanda Shelton
Date: 6/19/2017 1:03:00 PM
You are welcome. Thank you very much. I am glad you found me. I really do like your poem. Also I am very strong I have lost many people. I am glad I found this website. I will add you to support team. I am going to follow poets so I will add you to my list. ??

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