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In Memory - a Collaboration

This tribute memorial poem Is collaboration between myself and Belle Bellevue - a new poet on Poetry soup. In respect to her late Mother. Today 11th November 2020 would have been her mother’s 100th birthday. Mother 1920 - 2008 Wherever I go, you go with me too, always bedside me, whatever I do. And I wouldn't have it any other way, I love you, need you every single day. You took care of me, with your heart and hands, till the tables turned and I took command. I did all I could, hope it was enough, for the mother, I loved so very much. I held your hand at our last sad goodbye, afore handing you to angels stood by. You're here in spirit till the day I die, and we meet up in heaven above sky. --------------------------------------- I see you gazing as white clouds go by, you struggle to smile, but you must try. Oh my love, please don't worry about me, I dwell in a place of divine beauty. It's never easy when loved ones must go, but maternal bonds live forever though. We have that place somewhere only we know, where in times of sorrow, we would lay low. Live your life until your heart is content, fulfill your dreams with determined intent. I hope we do not meet again too soon, my child, keep humming a sweet robin’s tune. “When a robin appears, an angel stands near.”
Silent One Collaboration with Belle Bellevue 11 November 2020
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Macfarlane Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 11:34 AM
This tribute is so very beautiful , touching and loving. Excellent write S.O. and Belle. Hugs to you both.
Inman Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 10:47 AM
A beautifully touching write for both of you.
Hershey Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 8:33 PM
This is so beautiful. I held my mom's hand as she made her journey home. I love "I dwell in a place of divine beauty", I imagine that is where my mom is, and "You're here in spirit till the day I die", my mom's spirit is always with me. Thank you, for this heartfelt poem.
Canerdy Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 7:20 AM
SO, your and Belle's sweet descriptions of the mother-daughter relationship at its best have touched me this morning! Janice
One Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Thank you..
Roper Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 8:58 AM
Beautiful collaboration <3
One Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 5:50 AM
Thank you
Rodgers Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 5:28 AM
Real emotion ell expressed.
One Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 8:19 AM
Thank you..
Hopper Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 12:51 PM
Oh my goodness! This is beautiful!
Hopper Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 12:51 PM
Oh my goodness! This is beautiful!
One Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 8:19 AM
Thank you..
Gilmour Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 12:06 PM
Such a beautiful heartfelt collaboration you have both written. It reminds me of my own dear Mum, who passed in 1990 and for a long while I saw robins... thank you for this amazing write ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx
One Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 8:19 AM
Thank you.. Robins was something Belle wanted to include as her mum liked robins..
Rose  Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 9:39 AM
wow, this really touched my heart, you and Belle did an amazing job connecting the emotions. Lovely as ever, as a poem can be.
One Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 11:18 AM
Thank you..
Brul Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 2:43 AM
Such a sublime tribute to a mom by two brilliant poets. An excellent collab. The last quoted line is simply heart-warming. “When a robin appears, an angel stands near.”
One Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 9:02 AM
Thank you..
Nicole Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 9:07 PM
Memories live on and our loved ones are a part of us. So, they live within our hearts. A beautiful collaboration you two. Your thoughts caress gently around me. Belle- Happy 100th Birthday to your mother. Hugs, Brandy
One Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 9:02 AM
Thank you..
Buehler Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 7:21 PM
Such a wonderful collaboration in this tender and beautiful tribute. It's a Fave for me.
One Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 9:02 AM
Thank you..
Spears Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 7:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to her mother and all mothers.
One Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 9:03 AM
Thank you..
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 3:22 PM
Silent One and Belle og how beautifully done. I had emotions going .through me. Such a beautiful poem. Enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 11:38 AM
Hello Silent One, anoter summer day here in Canada. I am enjoying it. How are you doing? You are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.
One Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 9:03 AM
Thank you..
Crabtree Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 3:19 PM
A very heartfelt collaboration, Silent One. You two have written it well :)
One Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 9:03 AM
Thank you..
La France Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 10:16 AM
Silent and Belle, oh how emotional, your poem touched my heart for I have lost my mother too, and the music is so suited, well done, a FAV for me _Constance
Raghupatruni Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 9:01 AM
Great expressions sor
One Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 9:10 AM
Thank you..
Kendrick Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Ahhh!! Good work for the both of you in regards to honoring your mothers. I enjoyed reading both. Thanks for the visit to my page. I don't like mice either. Sara
One Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 8:59 AM
Thank you.. Mothers are so special...
Downing  Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 7:40 AM
Great great tribute to the mother. Heartwarming... I just love it! I must’ve read it more than a few times, especially the 2nd part...
One Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 8:59 AM
Thank you.. Glad you liked this one.. I wanted to help Belle write something special and I enjoyed writing from the perspective of a mother..
Cunningham Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 7:26 AM
A beautiful tribute to your Mother Belle and a great collaboration with S. O.. Your mother is never far away Belle, she lives on in your heart and fond memories that you have. Tom
One Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Thank you.. I agree with you Tom.
Pineau Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 7:10 AM
Lovely share filled with emotional gratitude .. In reflections of loss, memories are a comforting blanket.. Thank you for sharing .. :-)
One Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Thank you..
Edmonds  Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 5:03 AM
To everyone who has kindly commented on this memorial tribute poem written in collaboration with Silent One, to you all I send a huge, big thank you... Belle
One Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Very sweet of people to comment and support your mum's birthday.
Edmonds  Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 4:58 AM
Silent One, many thanks for working with me on this memorial tribute poem to commemorate my late mother’s 100th birthday. To say I’m pleased is an understatement, I am more than delighted, I’m thrilled. The video is wonderful, every word and the music. Bless you, Belle
One Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 9:01 AM
Thank you.. It was an honour to do so and I am happy your are pleased with it, the poem was written so fast, it was so natural.. Nothing in life as precious as a mother..
Y. Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 4:49 AM
WoW! Silent, This is such a outstanding collaboration between you and Belle. Your pens mesh well together. When our loved ones are no longer here , they live on in our memories and heart. The lines “ It's never easy when loved ones must go, but maternal bonds live forever though.“ Tugged at the heart strings. Excellent job. Have a wonderful day. Ps, I’ve noticed that you have been apart of some amazing collaborations lately-Alexis
One Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 9:02 AM
Thank you.. Loved ones will always live with us, even those we did not love so much.. I've been trying to encourage poets to come back and post.. and I wanted to help Belle write about her late mother...
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