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In Memory - a Collaboration

This tribute memorial poem Is collaboration between myself and Silent One - a kind, gracious man and poet. Today 11th November 2020 would have been my mother’s 100th birthday. Mother 1920 - 2008 Wherever I go you go with me too, always bedside me whatever I do. And I wouldn't have it any other way I love you, need you every single day. You took care of me, with your heart and hands, till the tables turned and I took command. I did all I could, hope it was enough, for the mother, I loved so very much. I held your hand at our last sad goodbye, afore handing you to angels stood by. You're here in spirit till the day I die, and we meet up in heaven above sky.  ~~~ I see you gazing as white clouds go by, you struggle to smile, but you must try. Oh my love, please don't worry about me, I dwell in a place of divine beauty. It's never easy when loved ones must go, but maternal bonds live forever though. We have that place somewhere only we know, where in times of sorrow, we would lay low. Live your life until your heart is content, fulfil your dreams with determined intent. I hope we do not meet again too soon, my child, keep humming a sweet robin’s tune. *+*+* “When robins appear, an angel stands near.” *+*+* 11th November 2020 Thank you Silent One for the collaboration and making this tribute so special, Belle
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Inman Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 10:54 AM
I read this on SO's page and was so touched I had to visit. The sorrow in your words is palpable. Be strong.
Edmonds  Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 1:33 PM
Thank you for visiting James. On the evening of that special day, we had a zoom meeting with ten family members, I read the poem out and they all loved it. I’m so grateful to Silent One for helping to make the poem so beautiful... Best wishes, Belle
Cunningham Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 10:30 AM
A beautiful tribute to your Mother Belle and a great collaboration with S. O.. Your mother is never far away Belle, she lives on in your heart and fond memories that you have. Tom
Edmonds  Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 5:10 PM
Thank you kindly Tom, our parents may be gone, but they do live on in heart and mind, always. Belle
La France Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 10:18 AM
Belle (and Silent) this is so emotional and beautiful, it touched my heart deeply, I have lost my mother too, a FAV for me _Constance
Edmonds  Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 5:05 PM
Thank you Constance, I wanted something really special for this special day and Silent helped me do it. Take care ~ Belle
Y. Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 5:36 AM
WoW! Belle, This is such a heartfelt and outstanding collaboration between you and Silent One. Your ink flowed well together. The relationship between a mother and child is priceless. When our loved ones aren’t hear physically , they live on in our memories and heart. The lines “ It's never easy when loved ones must go, but maternal bonds live forever though.“ Touched me to the core. Excellent job. Have a wonderful day-Alexis
Edmonds  Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 6:06 AM
Thank you so much Alexis for your delightful comments on this memorial poem in honour of my late mother’s 100th birthday. Silent One certainly has a magical touch, his pen being his wand... you have a wonderful day too, Belle
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 3:56 AM
- A wonderful co- poem, Belle ... I read it on S.O. page :) - Memories worth more than gold and diamonds :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Edmonds  Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 5:16 AM
Thank you Sunshine, I am thrilled with the poem to commemorate my late mother’s special day. Memories are very precious, the souvenirs of our past... Hugs sent straight back, Belle:-)
One Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 1:47 AM
Was an honour and pleasure to not just do a collaboration with you, but also to mark, what would have been your mum's 100th birthday... Shows you had a wonderful mum and she had a lovely daughter.. Some memories remain forever... Thank you
Edmonds  Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 5:11 AM
Silent One, it was an honour and pleasure for me to have you collaborate with me on this memorial tribute poem for my late mother. The poem’s a treasure I’ll keep forever. Thank you over and over... Belle
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