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In Melodic Rhythmic Mind

 

Melodic music

depths me

in deep thought…

and as it is

with such thoughts

about our creator

what we think

and hope for

can’t be divorced 

from place and time

in history 

culture and ourstory…

 

Our reality here

is not of heaven 

but of this

bi-polar earth

and our freedom

and liberation

must be sought

in this reality…

 

Check it out…

heaven is beyond time

and earth-bound stories

but as earthly beings

we are fixed here

in definite time

stories and culture

and we can not divorce

ourselves from such realities…

 

Just think about it…

our liberation has never

been nor should ever

be a mere fusing

of concepts

rather our liberation is

and has always been

a strategized perceived

process…

 

So just go and sit down

on the dock of time

and don’t worry

about a thing

for everything 

is going to be

alright

for we are recipients

of an almighty healing

amazing grace

and it has our backs

in life’s “tane-like”

melodic rhythmic race…


 

Melodic music
depths me
in deep thought…
and as it is
with such thoughts
about our creator
what we think
and hope for
can’t be divorced 
from place and time
in history 
culture and ourstory…

Our reality here
is not of heaven 
but of this
bi-polar earth
and our freedom
and liberation
must be sought
in this reality…

Check it out…
heaven is beyond time
and earth-bound stories
but as earthly beings
we are fixed here
in definite time
stories and culture
and we can not divorce
ourselves from such realities…

Just think about it…
our liberation has never
been nor should ever
be a mere fusing
of concepts
rather our liberation is
and has always been
a strategized perceived
process…

So just go and sit down
on the dock of time
and don’t worry
about a thing
for everything 
is going to be
alright
for we are recipients
of an almighty healing
amazing grace
and it has our backs
in life’s “Trane-like” race…



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