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In Marked Territory

In Marked Territory 10-28-24 - Sponsor: Edward Ibeh ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In Marked Territory Midnight tightly clasps the darkness, Like a wounded heart, In between topaz edges of twilight And pastels of first light. Jealous of its cosmos Shoos away the master of the day Turning the face of the daystar To other skies To claim small hours. Guardian of vanishing infinities Speaks Indigo borders For moonlight Moonbows And wishes on the first brave star Where waves of the galaxy Break Over unseen edges of stellar sands. Lit only by celestial lanterns Enchanter Conjures sovereign spells Declaring jurisdiction over platinum roses And Lover’s sighs That wax then wane under polar stars. Night rules this welkin magic, A sorcerer hiding a book of spells, This realm under the starry arch The moonrise The nebulae decorating the firmament, Where gravity hems in epiphanies.

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Date: 11/24/2024 9:19:00 PM
Masterfully crafted piece with vivid imagery, Sam. Thoroughly enjoyed. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/25/2024 10:07:00 AM
Good morning, Edward! How delightful to start off the week with a win in your contest! Thank you! Your themes always spark the most amazing poems and this one was no different. Such an honor to be on your winners list! I did love this theme that invited me to think outside the usual "territory!" Sending you my gratitude and blessings especially for your Thanksgiving. This placement has add to my Thanksgiving joy!
Date: 10/31/2024 12:47:00 PM
Some beautiful imagery in here Sam - fascinated by a moonbow! Sounds beautiful x
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/3/2024 8:27:00 PM
Hi DD! Thank you so much! A moonbow is an amazing phenomena! Thanks for your wonderful feedback! Blessing to you and gratitude!
Date: 10/29/2024 1:09:00 PM
Brilliant use of imagery and metaphors Sam, best of luck in the contest. Over Fork Over. Tom
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/3/2024 8:24:00 PM
Hi Tom! Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback and your compliments! Sometimes space feels like it has no borders yet we are bound by the borders of our galaxy. So fascinating! Hope you have had a wonderful weekend! Blessings! Over fork Over.

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