In Marked Territory

In Marked Territory 10-28-24 - Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
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In Marked Territory

Midnight tightly clasps the darkness,
Like a wounded heart,
In between topaz edges of twilight
 And pastels of first light.

Jealous of its cosmos
Shoos away the master of the day
 Turning the face of the daystar
  To other skies
To claim small hours.

Guardian of vanishing infinities
Speaks 
Indigo borders
 For moonlight
   Moonbows
    And wishes on the first brave star
Where waves of the galaxy
Break 
Over unseen edges of stellar sands.

Lit only by celestial lanterns
Enchanter 
Conjures sovereign spells
Declaring jurisdiction over platinum roses
And
Lover’s sighs 
That wax then wane under polar stars.

Night rules this welkin magic,
A sorcerer hiding a book of spells,
This realm under the starry arch
 The moonrise
  The nebulae decorating the firmament,
Where gravity hems in epiphanies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 11/24/2024 9:19:00 PM
Masterfully crafted piece with vivid imagery, Sam. Thoroughly enjoyed. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/25/2024 10:07:00 AM
Good morning, Edward! How delightful to start off the week with a win in your contest! Thank you! Your themes always spark the most amazing poems and this one was no different. Such an honor to be on your winners list! I did love this theme that invited me to think outside the usual "territory!" Sending you my gratitude and blessings especially for your Thanksgiving. This placement has add to my Thanksgiving joy!
Date: 10/29/2024 1:09:00 PM
Brilliant use of imagery and metaphors Sam, best of luck in the contest. Over Fork Over. Tom
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/3/2024 8:24:00 PM
Hi Tom! Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback and your compliments! Sometimes space feels like it has no borders yet we are bound by the borders of our galaxy. So fascinating! Hope you have had a wonderful weekend! Blessings! Over fork Over.
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