In Lovely Warmth of Sunshine

In lovely warmth of sunshine, here I sit.
I view nearby a beautiful blue lake.
Around me many birds of color flit,
and in the breeze, the lush trees' branches shake.

Far in the distance, there is an array
of little boats, each one a giant dot
that decorates the water. Children play
along a beach beneath my terrace spot.

I put my pen down just as swooping by,
a blue jay visits me! What a surprise!
Not one gray gloomy cloud disturbs the sky,
for life is roses and bright butterflies!

In lovely warmth of sunshine here I sit.
I view nearby a beautiful blue lake.

For William Kekaula's
'ILMO My Mom 06-24-29-08-04-09--90th Heavenly Birthday--The Most Beautiful Sonnet' Poetry Contest
Using
Second Scheme:                                    

1st      1a, 2b, 3a, 4b, (lines 1a & 2b repeats at the end, lines 13a & 14b)

2nd     5c, 6d, 7c, 8d,

3rd      9e, 10f, 11e, 12f

4th      13a, 14b, (lines 13a & 14b repeats from the beginning, lines 1a & 2b)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Chiri Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 4:56 AM
Andrea congrats on your win!;)
Kauffman Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 7:15 PM
Lovely sonnet, Andrea. I love sitting by a lake, Your words really set the scene! Congratulations and Kudos my friend.
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 11:21 PM
Wonderful!
Godwin Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 9:24 PM
Just beautiful and if I'm not mistaken it also has iambic pent, yes? A gorgeous job that is a joy to read while its imagery paints an idyllic scene in one's mind. A breath of fresh air is this sonnet! Loved it. Love ... CayCay (Oh, I just saw Natalyn's comment below, how sweet such words must feel to your heart! I could cry.)
Laurie Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 7:30 PM
Hello Andrea … the reality scenes are sometimes are hard to put perfectly into the words you want to, but you have done the job so well - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Warrior Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 10:07 AM
Well crafted my poetic sister..a lovely warmth of Andrea...ready for a big win...sending more sunshine...^WW^ :o)
Parker Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 8:42 PM
peaceful imagery Andrea
Horsman Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 4:27 PM
lovely Sonnet, Andrea.
Anish Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 3:05 PM
Nice sonnet - you are the most prolific poetess I know of! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Pandit Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 2:56 PM
Indeed, a beautiful sonnet Andrea..enjoyed the details and imagery. All the best.
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