In Love With Rosalyn

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Lend me a friendly hand to propose to my lovely Rosalyn!
Her dreamy eyes has got my heart, I yearn her to fill my life in,
She is more friends with you than me,it must be my crazy hairy skin,
So help me Silver, help me quick, lovely Rosalyn I can win!

Her dreamy eyes has got my heart, I yearn her to fill my life in,
the way she walks to clamber up that tree,as princely as can be,
So help me Silver, help me quick, lovely Rosalyn I can win!
Dash across and fill her in, my message of love for her to see!

the way she walks to clamber up that tree,as princely as can be,
She loves me too, I know it well, find it hard to directly tell,
Dash across and fill her in, my message of love for her to see!
If she agrees, let her God! just go to church house and ring the bell!

She loves me too, I know it well, find it hard to directly tell,
She is more friends with you than me,it must be my crazy hairy skin,
If she agrees, let her God! just go to church house and ring the bell!
Lend me a friendly hand to propose to my lovely Rosalyn!

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Date: 5/27/2020 2:09:00 PM
This is so creative. You have sprinkled emotions of love with sanctity over a picture and created beautiful dimensions. All the best for the contest :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/27/2020 2:40:00 PM
Thanks Aditi! Thanks to Eve, I am enjoying this format. Fingers crossed!
Date: 5/23/2020 9:29:00 AM
Kirsh, this is such a fun take on the picture...well done!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/23/2020 10:56:00 AM
Thanks Jeanne! Pantoum is an interesting form that I have learnt thanks to Eve Roper!
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