In Love Alone

When my thoughts are at its 
deepest
And all cease so that i may be in 
emptiness
I am forever filled yet because there 
is someone in my heart
Someone who offers a wicked love
So wicked, i wonder what, when or 
why
With whispers and whimpers, this 
love is wicked but humble
It leaves me hungrily happy but 
hostile in harmony. 
Confusion is contrasting in my 
minds confidement with my heart
At last,trust in agreement
At peace
And lastly my minds sends sweet 
symphonies of singing so subtle that 
this can only be called one thing : 
Lonely love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Nigros Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 2:32 AM
Welcome to the soup,,, what a sweet intro,,,,
Shines Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 8:46 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup,beautiful write.
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September 7, 2013 at 8:10 PM
Hi Sarah, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
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September 6, 2013 at 2:11 AM
Thanks! means a lot
Tacito Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 8:03 PM
Fantastic. A very deep, melancholic writing. Love can be misleading, at times. Excellent work!
Saunders Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 2:00 PM
#Loved it Ms Stainbank :)
A   Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 12:53 PM
hello, Sarah, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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September 5, 2013 at 10:43 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Sarah ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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