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IN LOVE

 IN LOVE
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Love is nectar.
Love is heaven.
Heaven like home, we always need
where soul  ever smiles,
never feels tension.
In love,
you are my music,
I am your musician.

Love is trust.
Love is hope.
Hope hands success
after little failure
or without any flop.
In love,
Your are my ocean,
I am your raindrop.

Love is life.
Love is relation.
Relation can only be cemented
with  mutual trust
and extreme affection.
In love,
You are my ink,
I am your pen.

Love is thought.
Love is brain.
With a sagacious brain
we can fly to our goal
without any pain. 
In love,
You are my blood,
I am your vein.
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Date: 9/18/2016 7:59:00 AM
Good morning, Manmath, a lovely inspirational read. A beautiful delight to read this morning. ((ps... Thank you for your comment, this is truly the first poem I'm dedicating myself to, that doesn't belong to a new poet or my contest. I haven't forgotten those who have given me so much support. I just haven't had the inspiration to enjoy this site as I use to before. However, I am going to pay more attention to those I enjoy.)) Sending hugs... Linda
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Date: 5/5/2016 1:12:00 PM
This is is fine piece with soul-reaching quality. I love this so much
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Date: 5/2/2016 1:26:00 PM
This is awesome... Thank you so much for this wonderful share
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Date: 5/1/2016 5:55:00 PM
Hello Manmath . . . I see that you're brand new to Poetry Soup. A most humble welcome from me!! Thanks, by the way, for commenting on my recent couplet poem entitled: "Our Human Nature." You Imagism poem is so beautifully rendered. A "7" + A Big Fav for sure from me. Outstanding Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 4/27/2016 10:57:00 PM
Profound analogies about what love is, and you picked the most intense one for last: "You are my blood, I am your vein." You expressed yourself very well here with a poem that was easy to connect with. Good work!
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Date: 4/27/2016 2:52:00 AM
I love this poem Manmath, especially the way you ended it. Gave me chills! Beautiful! #7 ; )
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Date: 4/26/2016 1:40:00 PM
You defined love deeply and beautifully ..Awesome.>>Charma.
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Date: 4/25/2016 9:32:00 PM
You have some very nice metaphors in this work. Take a look a my work and let me know what you think! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/25/2016 3:48:00 AM
Congrats on your placement, Manmath.
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:20:00 PM
Love is all you have said and more! Great write!
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Date: 4/22/2016 10:10:00 AM
Hi Manmath, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Enjoyed the read....Mike.
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Date: 4/22/2016 4:53:00 AM
Wonderful imagery n win.. big congrats Manmath..
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Date: 4/21/2016 10:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win ...
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Date: 4/21/2016 8:45:00 PM
this is a precious song of love, Manmath! and a big congrats in the contest.
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Date: 4/21/2016 10:20:00 AM
Back to congratulate you, Manmath, for your fine win in the 'golden oldies' contest. Beautifully written! Sandra
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Date: 4/21/2016 9:56:00 AM
Congratulation my lovely friend on your beautiful win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/19/2016 4:22:00 PM
AN IMAGE FEAST OF LOVE AND ITS POSITIVE ATTRIBUTES MY FRIEND. Very well written and a pleasure to read.. A7
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Date: 4/19/2016 10:19:00 AM
Beautiful poem enjoyed from you my lovely friend. Nice poem on imagism. You are my blood I am your vein, loved much. Loved always , bl
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Date: 4/19/2016 7:20:00 AM
A lovely description!
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Date: 4/18/2016 6:44:00 PM
Manmath, a beautiful and lovely poem. Love flourish ever so beautiful on here. I'm happy to see a new one from you again. Luv Linda
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Date: 4/18/2016 5:25:00 PM
Very creative, Manmath, and full of imagery and metaphors in presenting the true meaning of love. I enjoyed your poem very much. Sandra
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Date: 4/18/2016 2:53:00 PM
great mataphors. Creative thinking!
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Date: 4/18/2016 7:21:00 AM
Enjoyed reading every word.
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Date: 4/17/2016 4:28:00 PM
how wonderful is your kind of love so finely done, manmath.. huggs
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/18/2016 9:54:00 PM
Thanks a lot........Nette.
Date: 4/17/2016 3:34:00 PM
- A wonderful description of love, Manmath - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/18/2016 9:53:00 PM
Thanks a lot........Anne.
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