In Love

I will try to sleep now, sad I am 
alone, but not all due. You Are with 
me, I take the pain alone . I should 
not see what I take , again back to 
loneliness but all I see is a light, I 
hate my isolated soul. It stops me 
from you, I try to break free , orange 
fire a shows the truth of us. I see 
you my love; wearing nothing but 
white; a smile and a loved one 
guiding you towards me; happy ! 
Not only me but others, they see our 
love; I see it in morning and night. 
We create a vanity, something that 
brings us closer but also never 
apart. My heart is yours; now we 
see future of what we miss xxxx
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 1, 2013 at 2:26 PM
Ryan , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD
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December 1, 2012 at 1:27 PM
Ryan, Great poem, where R U Lost? Lynn Barany
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