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In Love

Sometimes I look at you and I get Lost A feeling that blows off my mind like chaff Lost like a bee drowning in the nectars I feel warm and I watch you like a movie Your charming face ignites warmth between How you do your eyes sometimes wrecks me I don't say it to you,It leaves me striken Woman,you stole my heart and my joy is in you Hold my hand,hold my soul, let's ride forever! ©Carlos Bett 2020

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Date: 10/25/2024 9:37:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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